Connect the Dots
an aggregate world
made up of many
particles that breathe
that mingle to form
lives that touch others
parallel lives
some are lucky
intersecting
at random points
organisms
influence
each other
far...near
we are
one
*Sept. 14, 2010
written for Rick's The Universe contest :)
Copyright © Kabuteng P.Ink K. | Year Posted 2010
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