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Conn---Ected

I feel possessed, i am obsessed, my soul undressed, i confessed. No one but you, nice to know you, if only you would hear when i say i love you. Before you i knew no magic, now i feel my life so tragic. Why is it that some people attract us, such a brilliant force which grabs us. I find no joy in your absence, i can be still forever in your presence. Why is it that you captured my soul and mind, only you can bring me some peace and rhyme. I try to tell them i am not insane, and this isn't just a phase in the rain. No one does but me, with me forever you will be. We think so alike, you make my heart fly like a kite. I feel strange about this entire episode, empty memories are all i load, “all happens for a reason” i heard, you flew away like a bird. My imagination ran wild, this plastic world made me rile, and i wonder... only a picture can change my profile, what damage reality can do to my mind! Oh God! my emotions forming a concoction, am i the only one who feels the connection? i don't want to follow and fly away like you did, i only feel hollow and my soul connec-ted. Rinki Nandy (This is about my inspiration from Michael Jackson)

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 9/3/2010 11:39:00 PM
Hi, there rinki. YOu did well making this sound like obsessive love. Keep up your creative writing. LUv, Andrea
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Date: 8/19/2010 1:44:00 AM
Rinki, nice and impressive, this poem really got me all caught up in it,, enjoyed,..p.d.
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Date: 6/11/2010 9:24:00 AM
This is like the communication highway; Stay Connected! I like the message. Don't let that bird fly away too far. Great job! Joseph
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Date: 6/10/2010 9:51:00 AM
Like the rhythm and rhyme in this one..Keep the creativeness flowing..Sara
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Date: 6/9/2010 8:32:00 PM
Nice monorhyme rinki and there is a Monorhyme contest posted on the "contest" page if u are interested ..it will get your poems noticed once entered especially if they win.. only read the guidelines.. and follow the rules of the line count and u can enter ... good luck if u decide to..luv.. thankxxx for commenting on my Passion's Magic Moment.. it was a winning poem in a contest on Soup.. luv.. Linda-Marie..
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