Congenial With a Puppy

A puppy is my kindred spirit
I am embarassed to admit
We have so much in common
I will not list the sum

Please don't tell the tabloids
It would take away the stars publicity
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Foulk Avatar
April 17, 2011 at 8:13 PM
a very nice write, enjoyed
Maverick Avatar
March 15, 2011 at 10:02 AM
Nice homey words Doris, best wishes.
Melody Lightning Ink Avatar
March 7, 2011 at 3:24 AM
Thanks for Ur comment on my poem, "lightning ink".I give God the glory for i am only a lightning grace.
Barrow Avatar
February 27, 2011 at 7:47 AM
nice writing
Melody Lightning Ink Avatar
February 25, 2011 at 2:49 AM
Great work here. No wonder one man said the more he know about human being, the more he admire the dogs. I second ur notion dear Doris.
Sweetheart Avatar
February 24, 2011 at 9:17 AM
Oh so very cute Doris.. my puppy is my kindred spirit but right now he is living with my son Christopher to keep him company..so am missing him.. luv these last two lines.. a treat luv..
Johnson Avatar
February 23, 2011 at 12:16 PM
Dear Doris Thank you for your comment... Love them puppys too... Don
Kendrick Avatar
February 23, 2011 at 7:07 AM
Interesting work..How is my grand puppy doing since spending two days and nights with granny...Mom
Poet Avatar
February 23, 2011 at 2:31 AM
Very cute write .Liked it!
Devonshire Avatar
February 22, 2011 at 11:52 AM
Doris, If I saw you with your puppy on a tabloid, I'd surely buy it. I'm not much into all the rumors about stars. But a lady with a puppy who is her kindred spirit would touch my heart. Beautiful work! Love, Carolyn
Onclaud Avatar
February 22, 2011 at 9:56 AM
awwh, a soulful write with tinges of playfulness, doris... i love pets! sparkling stuff! :) huggs, nette
Rhinem Avatar
February 22, 2011 at 7:49 AM
Smile ~ "Gaze Into 'Your Beautiful Eyes'" &, slowly fade away into another serene moment of Utpoia, coming true ~ Smile, you see what can be brought forth amid such a sweeet little painting, my dear ~ "Thank You," for the kind & much appreciated com &, Glad to find "Your Treasures" posting again; "A Perfumed Flower of 'Lovely Fragrance.'" ~ "My Love & Warmth to 'You Always' &, All You Love, 'Forevermore,'" John! ~ Smile, "Have 'A Very Beautiful Day My Dear;'" Bye!:) ~
Rhinem Avatar
February 22, 2011 at 7:41 AM
Smile ~ Albeit only enhanced by the loving care for his/her precious tiny life in that, "Your Magnificence," were to say, take they for natures walks and, whisper sweet words into their joyous ears and, feed they their favourite treats; then "Yes," loyal unto their departing days while as they daydream always of perhaps, lying upon "Your Beauties" lap or being held closely unto "Your Sweethearts Breast;" listening intently unto the warmth of "Your Lovely Melody" as they ~ Cont:)
Rhinem Avatar
February 22, 2011 at 7:32 AM
Smile ~ I have read through this cute and sweetly brushed verse a few times "My 'Dear, Precious & Priceless, Beautiful Doris Culverhouse!!!'" ~ And arriving upon the final brushes stroke I Am left wondering whom exactly the Star amid the muses reflection may be??? But, from empathies perspective I would somehow Imagine that "Yes," within the little puppies eyes, "Your Beauty," would most definitely hold Star qualities wrapped in tender love I would say ~ Cont:)
Pettit Avatar
February 22, 2011 at 6:38 AM
No need to be embarassed. Some of the most famous people in history have had dogs by their sides. You have written this well.
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