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Confusion In My Brain

Do I trust them and show them my phoniness, Or trust no one and live in loneliness, I can’t hold on, There’s too much pain, With thoughts of suicide in my brain, Confusing my every action, I wish it were a simple chore to face my demons, One man shouldn’t be alone, Should I fight the pain? Or surrender my arms? Do I trust them? Or live in loneliness? My feelings can’t be right, someone give me the courage to fight, Or I will be sucked into this maelstrom of pain.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 7/19/2011 4:16:00 AM
A warm welcome to PoetrySoup I offer to you Timmy. I wish for you the best in your writing endeavors whatever they may be. May you find inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets. Read and comment on their's and they will return in kind. May the sun shine on you that you might find great joy in your life. Love and blessing always, Carol
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Date: 7/19/2011 12:26:00 AM
Gosh, This is so sad. I feel the pain in your words. I hope things get better for you. I can relate.. Friend if you want one, Jay.
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