Confused

Get up
         accomplish what I can
                                       go to bed
Get up
         accomplish what I can
                                       if possible have some fun
                                                                          go to bed
Get up
        accomplish what
                              have fun
                                         go to bed
Sleep late
             have fun
                        stay up late
Getting better
                  right
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Moribund Avatar
November 5, 2009 at 11:02 AM
Dear Sara: Very interesting and cool poem. Sheol
Fraser Avatar
July 30, 2009 at 1:32 PM
Kool write Sara, i am really enjoying your poetry>>James
Brown Avatar
July 30, 2009 at 6:02 AM
Keep on a rockin Sara. Unique writing here my friend.. Love, Carol
De Bekker Avatar
July 30, 2009 at 5:08 AM
Really creative, i love this poem :) and thanks for the comment :) Charlotte x
Brown Avatar
July 29, 2009 at 9:04 PM
i love this poem. i know i feel that way quite frequently.
Devonshire Avatar
July 29, 2009 at 3:26 PM
This sounds like you have made progress, day-by-day, Sara! Great Write! We all need some fun in our lives. Love, Carolyn
Goff Avatar
July 29, 2009 at 2:53 PM
Hi Sara!... Buffy Sainte-Marie, singer, songwriter, teacher, Native-American political activist, has just released her newest CD..."Running For The Drum" her first in 13 yrs..... born in Canada, she espouses her heritage as 'Native North American...and in this CD, she has a song "No No Keshagesh" ( a Native American slur for ...'greedy-guts') that admonishes the actions of modern-day speculators and bankers...hope this helps explain my lanterne!!! jimbo
Goff Avatar
July 29, 2009 at 2:06 PM
love the disjointed feel to this tome, Sara! jim
Knop Avatar
July 29, 2009 at 2:03 PM
Hi Sara, I'll follow your prescription: I'm always going to bed too late as the night doesn't disturb you with noises. A good time to write poetry. Love, Gert And thank you for your comments!
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