Confused

Get up accomplish what I can go to bed Get up accomplish what I can if possible have some fun go to bed Get up accomplish what have fun go to bed Sleep late have fun stay up late Getting better right

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Sheol Moribund

Date: 11/5/2009 11:02:00 AM

Dear Sara: Very interesting and cool poem. Sheol

James Fraser

Date: 7/30/2009 1:32:00 PM

Kool write Sara, i am really enjoying your poetry>>James

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 7/30/2009 6:02:00 AM

Keep on a rockin Sara. Unique writing here my friend.. Love, Carol

Charlotte De Bekker

Date: 7/30/2009 5:08:00 AM

Really creative, i love this poem :) and thanks for the comment :) Charlotte x

Nicole Sharon Brown

Date: 7/29/2009 9:04:00 PM

i love this poem. i know i feel that way quite frequently.

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 7/29/2009 3:26:00 PM

This sounds like you have made progress, day-by-day, Sara! Great Write! We all need some fun in our lives. Love, Carolyn

James Marshall Goff

Date: 7/29/2009 2:53:00 PM

Hi Sara!... Buffy Sainte-Marie, singer, songwriter, teacher, Native-American political activist, has just released her newest CD..."Running For The Drum" her first in 13 yrs..... born in Canada, she espouses her heritage as 'Native North American...and in this CD, she has a song "No No Keshagesh" ( a Native American slur for ...'greedy-guts') that admonishes the actions of modern-day speculators and bankers...hope this helps explain my lanterne!!! jimbo

James Marshall Goff

Date: 7/29/2009 2:06:00 PM

love the disjointed feel to this tome, Sara! jim

Gert W. Knop

Date: 7/29/2009 2:03:00 PM

Hi Sara, I'll follow your prescription: I'm always going to bed too late as the night doesn't disturb you with noises. A good time to write poetry. Love, Gert And thank you for your comments!