Confounded - S,Jagathsimhan Nair

CONFOUNDED    ( COLLABORATION )


by~ S.Jagathsimhan Nair

When tension grips and the head reels
In its ever accelerated twirl
When two rays dangle from two flayed poles,
And the dumb loss of a moment’s truth
Looks so conspicuous and an eminently
Forgettable lapse of an inoffensive world
When the gentle genre to which the slamming
Of an ever open door in the face of
The rare perspicacity and purpose shown
By a soul, a land and a generation belongs
Looks so commonplace; when the benign
Visitor’s countenance does indeed despair
And crave a black visor above the originality
Of its expansiveness and the staggering degradation
Of its vitality; I have this great ache’s abundance
Stirring in my cupped palms, held out in supplication,
Till it rests, for an ever lasting understanding
Ever in the vision, ever into its aftermath.


by~ p.d.

The "aftermath" of any loss seems to consist in any form.
An aster plea subsiding every look.
Behind glory behind redemption~ 
Giving rest to the velocity speeding force
Creations of fantasy and religion and imagination
I paint the skies with my fingertips, to feel the mass
The world trembles at the knowledge of relativity.
"I sit in displeasure, injecting every generation into my veins!"
New born babies, born into this puzzled abyss. 
Bewildered minds accepting stupendous addictions.
A poison to taste every sunrise, 
Forbidden tongues baffle the night 
Mental representation, stirring up conflict 
Foiled toes to hold and worship.
Steady vision behind these eyes so confounded.


a collaboration with* S,Jagathsimhan Nair

my collaboration contest
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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A  Avatar
February 4, 2016 at 10:52 PM
interesting **SKAT**
Dietrich Avatar
January 30, 2013 at 11:28 PM
by the way, I love your new contest idea. Hope I can come up with something.
Song Avatar
October 27, 2012 at 12:28 PM
Hey! I didn't know u 2 did a collab...or if I did, I completely forgot!! Wonderful!!! Just wonderful! luv, gwendolen
Perez Avatar
November 15, 2011 at 6:44 AM
Dear Poet, My son and I wrote a poem together, just for fun. He is a better poet than me, but as they say, the apple doesn't fall far from the tree. He teaches in the Humanities Dept. at Embry Riddle U. in Daytona. What can I say - I am proud. I am posting for you the Mom/Michael poem Love, Nola
Wesley Avatar
October 6, 2011 at 3:49 PM
Queen of collab, that's what you are and doing a regal job in every one! Love the bewildering descriptions in both of these that tease my mind! Lu Lizzy.
Anish Avatar
August 30, 2011 at 10:16 PM
Some great lines in this piece, Linda! I especialyy like the line,"I paint the skies with my finger with my fingertips, to feel the mass". Hope all is well with you and yours. Keep writing and stay in touch! Love Matthew Anish
Culverhouse Avatar
August 30, 2011 at 9:22 PM
How are you? you are not in Irenes path are you?? Hope you have a good week.
Kendrick Avatar
August 30, 2011 at 1:05 PM
Another great team for the contest..Wonder who will come out ahead in this contest..Enjoyed reading this afternoon..Desiring some more of those fried apples..Sara
Chenevert Avatar
August 30, 2011 at 10:55 AM
Behind glory and redemption comes "True knowledge." Good verse and expertly expressed. Jim
Cooke Avatar
August 30, 2011 at 10:23 AM
forbidden tongues baffle the night, wow there are lines in this which can only come from some divine inspiration. love it
Song Avatar
August 30, 2011 at 9:18 AM
Love the poison to taste every sunrise...collaboration with other poets sure does widen your writing experience. I don't know of anyone who does this more than you, PD. Do you have a cure for writer's block? A vitamin, a ritual?...Glad u enjoyed Angels Day Off..it was a fun write indeed. Have a great Tuesday! Gwendolen
Brown Avatar
August 30, 2011 at 8:55 AM
So much emotion flowing in the poetry I am reading this morning of both seasoned poets and new poets. I am happy I was able to read your poetry today P.D. and Jag. Have a wonderful day and I will be back soon to read more of your writing. Love, Carol
M V Avatar
August 30, 2011 at 4:54 AM
Beautiful verse!Very fruitful collaboration,poet friends.
Neels Avatar
August 30, 2011 at 1:32 AM
Irma, yours really brought this piece full circle.. As for the "jay francis" it was just a name I used for Nikko's contest.. I wrote that piece from a guy's perspective so I figured why not use a male name as well ;) hope that clear up some of the confusion.. Hope you are asleep by now as the birds are chirping on this side of the world ;) tc Wilma
Ivy D Avatar
August 30, 2011 at 1:28 AM
Painting the sky with my own fingertips. Wishing you the best in your contest' s.
Nair Avatar
August 30, 2011 at 1:21 AM
Enjoyed it really,p.d...done exceedingly well by giving it a vision and definiteness through those gifted, silken lines of yours. Unlike my own second part to it which leaves me still confounded .Now your part settles it and i am happy and thankful for the redemption it got at your hands or rather those' painting-the-sky-fingertips'
Ross Jr. Avatar
August 29, 2011 at 11:50 PM
Wonderful insightful intense write, this world is truly an enigma and keeps getting worse pray for our children we must..lovely Lady Linda and S, Jagathsimha Nair, wonderful stimulating read...with love...old Jack......good luck on contest
Sivey Avatar
August 29, 2011 at 11:42 PM
What a great and very deep poem. I have to reread it several times to get its full effect and meaning! I rather like your styles! Thanks for sharing this wonderful poem(s)! Good luck in the contest!!
A   Avatar
August 29, 2011 at 10:48 PM
LOL! yes, this one was pretty tough for me... I really gave it my best.... hope he enjoyed it... I will be waiting to see how i did.... Thanks ,..p.d.
Dietrich Avatar
August 29, 2011 at 10:45 PM
Irma, this was hard for me to interpret, but I think your response was great. I loved that line "I paint the skies with my fingertips" and also I dug the mention of the newborn babies born into this puzzled abyss. Yes, it is a very puzzling world indeed!
B Avatar
August 29, 2011 at 10:23 PM
Loved this one you two, very nice. So many great lines, and well woven high level vocabulary make this an interesting read. Makes me wonder if those following in the aftermath will ever be able to look back and not be confounded, a deep concern indeed.
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