Aditi Mishra Poet Cinquain

Conflicts

Those Worlds
                                          open their doors 
                                     to me for old answers,
                             dreams in new universes merge...
                                                I walk
                            as somebody I've always known,
                                 through unending conflicts
                                         of tangled mind,
                                               emerge..

9th May 2020
For Let the Pens Flow - Butterfly Cinquain Poetry Contest
Sponsored By: Jenish Somadas
Winner: Third Place

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John Watt May 26, 2020 at 7:04 PM "through unending conflicts / of tangled mind / emerge". Isn't this the goal of living? To untangle the confusion holding on to the hope of emerging enlightened? I like how you rhymed merge with emerge, poetically tying together parts 1 & 2. Beautifully stated, congratulations on the win you received. Many blessings ~ John Aditi Mishra May 27, 2020 at 1:37 AM So glad you could relate with the conflicting ideas of my mind John. Yes that's the ultimate goal of our lives I believe, untying the knots of tangled mind and emerging englughtened. Thank you for your kind words of appreciation and blessings :)

Sam Kauffman May 14, 2020 at 11:07 PM Congratulations, Aditi. Strong, vivid imagery "dreams in new universes merge." Very nice. Aditi Mishra May 14, 2020 at 11:12 PM Thanks so much for dropping by and appreciating with your generous words Sam :)

Jenish Somadas May 14, 2020 at 9:36 AM Tangled mind.. Conflicts bloom.. Great write Aditi.. Congrats.. Aditi Mishra May 14, 2020 at 11:45 AM Thank you Jenish :)

Krish Radhakrishna May 14, 2020 at 9:07 AM Congrats Aditi! Another beautiful write. Keep it up! Aditi Mishra May 14, 2020 at 9:09 AM Thank you so much Krish :)