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Those Worlds open their doors to me for old answers, dreams in new universes merge... I walk as somebody I've always known, through unending conflicts of tangled mind, emerge.. 9th May 2020 For Let the Pens Flow - Butterfly Cinquain Poetry Contest Sponsored By: Jenish Somadas Winner: Third Place

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Date: 5/26/2020 7:04:00 PM
"through unending conflicts / of tangled mind / emerge". Isn't this the goal of living? To untangle the confusion holding on to the hope of emerging enlightened? I like how you rhymed merge with emerge, poetically tying together parts 1 & 2. Beautifully stated, congratulations on the win you received. Many blessings ~ John
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Aditi Mishra
Date: 5/27/2020 1:37:00 AM
So glad you could relate with the conflicting ideas of my mind John. Yes that's the ultimate goal of our lives I believe, untying the knots of tangled mind and emerging englughtened. Thank you for your kind words of appreciation and blessings :)
Date: 5/14/2020 11:07:00 PM
Congratulations, Aditi. Strong, vivid imagery "dreams in new universes merge." Very nice.
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Aditi Mishra
Date: 5/14/2020 11:12:00 PM
Thanks so much for dropping by and appreciating with your generous words Sam :)
Date: 5/14/2020 9:36:00 AM
Tangled mind.. Conflicts bloom.. Great write Aditi.. Congrats..
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Aditi Mishra
Date: 5/14/2020 11:45:00 AM
Thank you Jenish :)
Date: 5/14/2020 9:07:00 AM
Congrats Aditi! Another beautiful write. Keep it up!
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Aditi Mishra
Date: 5/14/2020 9:09:00 AM
Thank you so much Krish :)

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