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Conflict of Clouds

Liquid beads descend, As clouds hemorrhage in the sky: Cumulous battle.

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James Marshall Goff

Date: 6/11/2010 8:40:00 AM

very much enjoyed! gemini jim

James Fraser

Date: 6/3/2010 11:40:00 AM

Raul, this is pretty darned good. The thought of battles in the clouds is kool >> James

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 5/27/2010 4:39:00 PM

We have having some of this tonight Raul but it was 90 degrees at the New Jersey seashore where vacation is a MUST... luv your title and good luck with your contest.. with luv from the "Sweetheart"

Jay Loveless

Date: 5/27/2010 11:33:00 AM

oh my. such strong words leave vivid images in my mind. beautiful, dark. visions.

Scarlett Sepulvado Anderson

Date: 5/26/2010 8:39:00 AM

Very powerful and concise. It takes a good talent with pen to write with such few words. Love Scarlett

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/20/2010 2:50:00 PM

wow, this was amazing. Which contest was it? I don't see any hint of your having won it? If I forgot to do it, thanks for the win in your contest while I was away! Luv, andrea

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 5/18/2010 10:50:00 PM

Cumulous battle it seeme....... I love those liquis beads, I love the rain as much as i love the sun.. but this fierce hemoorhage is scaring me.. Must have been quite rough.. great Raul..another for my favs..Charma

Amy Green

Date: 5/18/2010 5:06:00 PM

Oh- awesome way to reflect on a storm. Great job! GL in the contest.