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A New Etheree Poem Any Theme Poetry Contest Tania Kitchin I Dated A sweet man We fell in love To a drummers beat All was fine and dandy Except his love for Brandy His secret lover tore us up He loved the liquor, hops, and spirits And I'd fight her off and send him packing

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Date: 3/4/2025 8:45:00 PM
Lines 7,9 and 10 are play on words in case if anyone is noticing. The poem can be read both ways with the other way full of innuendo.
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Date: 3/2/2025 5:51:00 AM
Connie, hope this is fiction, nicely done, congratulations on your winning placement.
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Date: 2/16/2025 2:41:00 PM
Brandy be a bad girl! Well, metaphorically anyway. Nice write CP
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Connie Pachecho
Date: 2/16/2025 6:41:00 PM
Thanks

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