Carolyn Devonshire Poet Monorhyme

Confined By Rhyme

My life has been confined by rhyme
Not in my prime as each limb I climb
On rhyme I fixate all of the time
A penny a word, maybe a dime
When the word won’t come, I pantomime




*Written April 11, 2014

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Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser April 19, 2014 at 11:26 AM I agree to Carrie that is double meaning.. Love it!! Splendid write carolyn dear.. :) CONGRATULATIONS and thanks :) olive_eloisa :)

Carrie Richards April 19, 2014 at 9:25 AM Oh wow........I would have placed this one higher........it has more than one meaning, I think I am reading between lines. Well done, Carolyn. I hope you are doing better day by day! Carolyn Devonshire April 19, 2014 at 12:23 PM Yes, Carrie, the double meaning was intentional. Thanks for picking up on it! Have a blessed Easter. Love, Carolyn

Dr. Upma A. Sharma April 19, 2014 at 1:43 AM Carolyn a beautiful rhyming poem,,,great win,,Congrats !

Verlena S. Walker April 18, 2014 at 7:46 PM Nice win Carolyn... Congratulations... Verlena

Tim Smith April 18, 2014 at 6:01 PM Just stopping by again to offer my congratulations on your fine win Carolyn...Have a happy Easter !!

Paul Callus April 18, 2014 at 3:47 PM This is a jolly good rhyme Carolyn. Congrats on a fine win. // paul

Arthur Vaso April 13, 2014 at 7:08 PM Flowing and oh so beautiful!!

Jack Horne April 12, 2014 at 4:14 PM lovely to enjoy your wit here again, love x

Anne-Lise Andresen April 12, 2014 at 6:09 AM - This gave me a smile Carolyn :) - Pleased to read :)) - Have a nice weekend! - oxox // Anne-Lise :) Anne-Lise Andresen April 12, 2014 at 6:10 AM (A YELLOW smile :)))

Andrea Dietrich April 11, 2014 at 8:13 PM this is REALLY cute. and I loved that last line!

Tim Smith April 11, 2014 at 7:06 PM Very nice rhyming Carolyn. I constantly rhyme myself. My kids think I'm crazy because I always make up songs using rhymes.....Hugs Tim

Louise Holley April 11, 2014 at 6:58 PM I like this.. Kind of reminds me of when im walking along thinking to myself about ideas for poetry. I never seem to be able to remember the good ones though my memory isn't very sharp. This is a great write i loved it