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Confectionery Love

They sailed on a sea of lemonade

Guided by the fairy floss clouds above

Sipping sparkling pink bubbles

Celebrating their candy cotton love


They sailed into the liquorice darkness

He hummed his sweetheart a lollipop tune

Eating snowy white chocolates 

Under the glow of the honeycomb moon

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Terry Flood

Date: 10/11/2024 5:22:00 PM

FFS… I’ve got the friggin munchies now… I’m trying to shed a pound or twelve… well, there’s always tomorrow…. Show me to the cake… yum yum ;-) [A sweet write, Deb… enjoyed… but I might need some dental attention.]

Jim Healey

Date: 10/10/2024 8:35:00 PM

This is such a "sweet" poem that I'm afraid my blood sugar levels will go way up! Ha! Nice work (as always). Take care.

Hilda Greenhough

Date: 10/10/2024 5:55:00 PM

This is a sweet poem. No kidding. My sweet tooth is aching. I love the metaphors.

Jay Narain

Date: 10/10/2024 10:30:00 AM

makes me hungry. Nice poem.

Arthur Vaso

Date: 10/10/2024 12:21:00 AM

I am him! now just find me my "her"

Maria Williams

Date: 10/9/2024 11:26:00 PM

This is deliciously sensual romantic offering, encapsulated in, and well put together, with mouth watering delicacies, enough to sweeten any romance. All the best if this is for a contest. Hugs Maria