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Confectionery Love

They sailed on a sea of lemonade Guided by the fairy floss clouds above Sipping sparkling pink bubbles Celebrating their candy cotton love They sailed into the liquorice darkness He hummed his sweetheart a lollipop tune Eating snowy white chocolates Under the glow of the honeycomb moon

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Date: 10/11/2024 5:22:00 PM
FFS… I’ve got the friggin munchies now… I’m trying to shed a pound or twelve… well, there’s always tomorrow…. Show me to the cake… yum yum ;-) [A sweet write, Deb… enjoyed… but I might need some dental attention.]
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Date: 10/10/2024 8:35:00 PM
This is such a "sweet" poem that I'm afraid my blood sugar levels will go way up! Ha! Nice work (as always). Take care.
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Date: 10/10/2024 5:55:00 PM
This is a sweet poem. No kidding. My sweet tooth is aching. I love the metaphors.
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Date: 10/10/2024 10:30:00 AM
makes me hungry. Nice poem.
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Date: 10/10/2024 12:21:00 AM
I am him! now just find me my "her"
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Date: 10/9/2024 11:26:00 PM
This is deliciously sensual romantic offering, encapsulated in, and well put together, with mouth watering delicacies, enough to sweeten any romance. All the best if this is for a contest. Hugs Maria
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Date: 10/9/2024 7:09:00 PM
Sounds like the sweetest date there ever was, very tasty… Beryl
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Date: 10/9/2024 5:49:00 PM
Now I gotta go find some snacks....thanks a lot Deb.....a very sweet poem...
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Date: 10/9/2024 2:39:00 PM
What a fun write. Where can I buy a ticket??? Have a fun day writing away...............
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Arthur Vaso
Date: 10/10/2024 12:21:00 AM
LOL me and you both!

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