Deb M Poet Rhyme

-Confectionery Love

They sailed on a sea of lemonade

Guided by the fairy floss clouds above

Sipping sparkling pink bubbles

Celebrating their candy cotton love


They sailed into the liquorice darkness

He hummed his sweetheart a lollipop tune

Eating snowy white chocolates 

Under the glow of the honeycomb moon

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Terry Flood October 11, 2024 at 5:22 PM FFS… I’ve got the friggin munchies now… I’m trying to shed a pound or twelve… well, there’s always tomorrow…. Show me to the cake… yum yum ;-) [A sweet write, Deb… enjoyed… but I might need some dental attention.]

Jim Healey October 10, 2024 at 8:35 PM This is such a "sweet" poem that I'm afraid my blood sugar levels will go way up! Ha! Nice work (as always). Take care.

Hilda Greenhough October 10, 2024 at 5:55 PM This is a sweet poem. No kidding. My sweet tooth is aching. I love the metaphors.

Jay Narain October 10, 2024 at 10:30 AM makes me hungry. Nice poem.

Arthur Vaso October 10, 2024 at 12:21 AM I am him! now just find me my "her"

Maria Williams October 9, 2024 at 11:26 PM This is deliciously sensual romantic offering, encapsulated in, and well put together, with mouth watering delicacies, enough to sweeten any romance. All the best if this is for a contest. Hugs Maria

Beryl Edmonds October 9, 2024 at 7:09 PM Sounds like the sweetest date there ever was, very tasty… Beryl

John Lawless October 9, 2024 at 5:49 PM Now I gotta go find some snacks....thanks a lot Deb.....a very sweet poem...

Paula Goldsmith October 9, 2024 at 2:39 PM What a fun write. Where can I buy a ticket??? Have a fun day writing away............... Arthur Vaso October 10, 2024 at 12:21 AM LOL me and you both!