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Coneflowers

the prickly-eyed coneflower bees attractively buzzing their squeeze. the purple petal umbrellas. a lovely echinacea breeze. butterflies and hummingbirds hove’.* red-winged blackbird, high perched above, does shelter in Eden, his brood. cones teem with life, vivacious love. 8/24/2022 Eight Lines of Rhyme - Your Favorite Flower Sponsor: Tania Kitchin Rhymes checked with rhymezone aaba rhyme scheme *hove’ - hover

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Date: 9/5/2022 6:18:00 AM
So pretty! Congratulations on your win Kim! Linda
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Date: 9/5/2022 1:58:00 AM
Congratulations, Kim, a beautiful poem.
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Date: 9/4/2022 5:54:00 PM
Hi Kim, Congratulations on your win! Echinacea flowers are so cool. I enjoyed reading your "coneflowers" :-)
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 9/4/2022 6:43:00 PM
Thank you :)
Date: 9/4/2022 2:10:00 PM
Kim, congratulations on your winning placement with your beautiful poem!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 9/4/2022 5:28:00 PM
Thank you, Tania! <3
Date: 8/26/2022 2:41:00 PM
A beautiful, creative poem. Nice one Kim :)
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 8/26/2022 6:04:00 PM
Thank you, Heidi!
Date: 8/25/2022 11:45:00 AM
You have brought my imagination into a beautiful garden, and I thank you!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 8/25/2022 9:12:00 PM
Gld you enjoyed the garden setting! Hugs ~ Kim
Date: 8/25/2022 10:52:00 AM
I saw a picture of the bees. Incredibly beautiful as the flower.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 8/25/2022 9:12:00 PM
Thank you, dear friend! Hugs ~ Kim
Date: 8/24/2022 5:20:00 PM
Dear Kim, your golden pen spills rich vibrant beauty. I adore coneflowers. Great use of language and exquisite imagery fills my heart and imagination with "vivacious" appreciation for your poetic gift. Best wishes for a win and warmest wishes for you.. ~Susan
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 8/24/2022 6:58:00 PM
Thank you, Susan! Hugs ~ Kim
Date: 8/24/2022 2:10:00 PM
Lovely write, Kim... Great for the contest. Many blessings
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 8/24/2022 3:31:00 PM
Thank you, sweet Eve!

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