Concrete Cat

O I am so sad now that she left for up above. Twenty years is a long time to love a cat, this sweet. A kitten came that fit my hand all fluffy and purring, she loved to cuddle all the long nights. I held her in my arms till her body was stone. And now I go to the place where I buried my beauty. I told my friends- no, no, more cats for this here girl. They say just give it time! Oh, oh my- days are empty, sometimes, I hear her soft meow call, calling for me, and that breaks my heart. Tears, now fall fall fall like rain on my new wee cat. ______________________________ August 23, 2018 Poetry/Concrete/Concrete Cat Copyright Protected, ID 18-1198-804-01 All Rights Reserved. Written under Pseudonym. Submitted to FGI Blog Series 5 - Shape Brian Strand Podium Place 1

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Date: 12/27/2019 10:23:00 AM
I dread the day my Annie goes away, shes a pain but I love her! I wish I had your talent my friend!
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Constance La France
Date: 12/27/2019 5:31:00 PM
Bobby, thanks for visiting and the comment, it was a terrible time, my avator is in honor of my girl for she loved the garden, I will never get over losing her but there is room in my heart for this new kitty ~
Date: 11/17/2019 9:09:00 AM
A Wonderful write, touching and well written with a delightful shape. 20 years, wow. : (
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Constance La France
Date: 11/18/2019 3:55:00 PM
James, thanks for the compliment on my poem and yes 20 years of unconditional love is hard to let go of !
Date: 11/16/2019 10:32:00 AM
Interesting storyline and such clever graphics, Constance. I have no ability in this area!
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Constance La France
Date: 11/18/2019 3:56:00 PM
Wendy, thanks for visiting, it is not easy to do these shape poems !
Date: 11/16/2019 9:25:00 AM
Creative gone Cat...Nice One
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Constance La France
Date: 11/18/2019 3:56:00 PM
Arturo, thanks for the creative !
Date: 11/16/2019 8:59:00 AM
So sad when they go, this is a pure masterpiece and a fav
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Constance La France
Date: 11/18/2019 3:57:00 PM
TS, it still hurts when I think about my beautiful old cat but it does help to have another fluff ball, thanks for the compliment and the FAV!
Date: 11/16/2019 8:32:00 AM
This is beyond awesome my friend!!!
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Constance La France
Date: 11/18/2019 3:58:00 PM
Bobby thanks so much for the awesome !
Date: 11/16/2019 8:18:00 AM
This is just amazing--truly extra ordinary-- both in design and content..I am in awe of your gift of creativity, Dear Heart.
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Constance La France
Date: 11/18/2019 3:58:00 PM
Vijay, thanks for the amazing and the compliment !
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