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Concordance Appearances

The sky noise was very loud As I walked upon the ground The path shined before me With mysterious sights to see Stopping to take the first one in It was here transformation did begin What does your thoughts tell you As your spiritual awakening grew? In which reality does your heart dwell Once you are under the spell? Before forever began I did exist Everywhere and after now I will persist

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Date: 12/1/2023 8:49:00 AM
Sanford, your poem is a profound journey of self-discovery and existential contemplation, articulated with a unique blend of introspection and curiosity. Your eloquent use of imagery and metaphor creates a deeply engaging narrative that invites readers to reflect on their own spiritual journeys. - Blessings, Daniel
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