Concordance Appearances

The sky noise was very loud
As I walked upon the ground 

The path shined before me
With mysterious sights to see

Stopping to take the first one in
It was here transformation did begin

What does your thoughts tell you
As your spiritual awakening grew?

In which reality does your heart dwell 
Once you are under the spell?

Before forever began I did exist 
Everywhere and after now I will persist
Copyright © | Year Posted 2020

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December 1, 2023 at 8:49 AM
Sanford, your poem is a profound journey of self-discovery and existential contemplation, articulated with a unique blend of introspection and curiosity. Your eloquent use of imagery and metaphor creates a deeply engaging narrative that invites readers to reflect on their own spiritual journeys. - Blessings, Daniel
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