Concerning the Achievement of Life Goals - Keep It Simple

insects set but two:
eating and copulating
(sounds okay to me)


Footnote: Goal #3 - Winning or placing in PD's Haiku contest
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Dietrich Avatar
July 31, 2015 at 8:43 PM
hmm, this one was pretty good!!! Wish I saw it higher on the list, but it's fun to see it again, Tim.
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July 31, 2015 at 1:31 PM
TIM, Congrats on your win. SKAT
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July 30, 2015 at 10:57 PM
Congrats on ur brilliant winning poem Tim! Great work!
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July 30, 2015 at 2:46 PM
Tim :), Congratulations! Thank you for supporting my giggle haiku contest. I enjoyed reading every entry placed on the winning list. Stop by my latest blog "MY CAT" if you'd like or have the time. Yours Truly! ~LINDA~
Breidenthal Avatar
May 13, 2015 at 2:48 AM
Nice one Tim! You never fail to put a smile on my face. ( : Always, Laura
Pinet Avatar
April 13, 2015 at 11:04 AM
Sounds OK to me as well. Its amusing and entertaining all in one. Emile.
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April 12, 2015 at 1:22 PM
Very witty, Tim! "Sounds okay to me" as well. Best wishes in the contest! Love, Carolyn
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April 12, 2015 at 12:06 AM
WOW, Tim :) I have this one on hold.. I love the goal, looking forward to making you my star :) Love it, I don't know about the sound, however... hehhe..Linda
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April 9, 2015 at 10:42 AM
Tim, those insects may have a short life but it must be a happy life, 7, and thanks for visiting my poetry, yes, it is odd for me to write happy but refreshing for the soul
Marcum Wong Avatar
March 24, 2015 at 2:06 AM
This poem tickled me Tim. I hope it is a winner. I loved it! 7
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March 15, 2015 at 1:25 PM
:D Sounds great to me as well, Tim. You gave me a giggle. Thanks and best wishes in the contest! Love, Carolyn
Dietrich Avatar
March 10, 2015 at 5:58 PM
And also working, like those little working bees!! Cute, Tim!!
Johnson-Saunders Avatar
March 10, 2015 at 12:45 PM
Ahhh, the simple life...love it! Hugs, rhonda
Allison Avatar
March 9, 2015 at 3:10 PM
made me smile Tim hope you archive your goal and place high:-) Hugs jan xx
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March 9, 2015 at 3:44 AM
...... and thereafter die (?) :)))).... well written, Tim ! - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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March 9, 2015 at 8:40 PM
What a way to go though Lise! Thanks for the comment...
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