Jan Allison Poet Rhyme

Notes About The Poem

Conception Deception

The bloodstained blade slipped from my trembling hand
Their affair and her conception, I wouldn't try to understand
I ignored his piteous cries and stabbed his heart with my knife
He lied in dismal denial,  but her belly had been scanned
My husband crossed the threshold when he deceived me, his wife

Required words, Bloodstained, conception, piteous, dismal, threshold

Rhyme time with 5 contest
Sponsored by laura Loo

09-21-17

♡Like0

Share Poem

---

Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem. Negative comments will result your account being banned.

Please Login to post a comment

Constance La France October 12, 2017 at 6:56 AM Jan, amazing how you got those words in so few lines, wonderful, CONGRATULATIONS! Jan Allison October 12, 2017 at 8:23 AM Thanks Constance I was delighted to place so well:-) hugs jan xx

Sandra Haight October 11, 2017 at 2:05 PM Well done, Jan...all those words in five lines with such an intriguing murder story too! Congratulations on your 1st Place Win. Hugs, Sandra Jan Allison October 11, 2017 at 2:28 PM Thanks Sandra:-) I set myself the challenge of getting all 5 lines in one stanza and was delighted LuLoo liked it so much:-) hugs Jan xx

Gregory Richard Barden October 10, 2017 at 11:02 PM Congratulations on your win, Jan - great stuff! Jan Allison October 11, 2017 at 3:10 AM Thanks Greg:-) hugs Jan xx

Joseph May October 10, 2017 at 8:52 AM Congrats on your win Jan Jan Allison October 10, 2017 at 9:16 AM Thanks Joseph:-) hugs Jan xx

Dale Gregory Cozart October 10, 2017 at 7:47 AM Congrats, Jan! Jan Allison October 10, 2017 at 9:16 AM Thanks Dale:-) hugs Jan xx

John Gondolf October 10, 2017 at 6:13 AM Jan, congrats! This is a great poem. Jan Allison October 10, 2017 at 6:51 AM Thanks John I'm delighted to place so well:-) hugs jan xx

Beautiful Scars October 10, 2017 at 5:59 AM what a great poem lovely Jan! thank you and congrats :) Jan Allison October 10, 2017 at 6:50 AM Many thanks Luloo!!! I thought the poem may be too short but I was determined to get all the words into one stanza and I'm SO delighted with my top spot:-) hugs jan xx

Eve Roper September 21, 2017 at 7:43 PM Wow, amazing write, Jan, good luck in the contest. Hugs Eve ~`* Jan Allison September 22, 2017 at 3:20 AM My muse was in a dark frame of mind yesterday Eve. The poem may be too short for LuLoo but I managed to get all 5 words in one stanza which was my aim:-) hugs jan xx

Russell Sivey September 21, 2017 at 4:05 PM This is a poem so different than what you normally write that I forgot who had written it! I really enjoyed reading your frightful poem this afternoon my friend! What a glorious piece, good luck in contest! Great Work!! Jan Allison September 21, 2017 at 5:27 PM It would appear my muse is in a dark frame of mind lol I hope her humour is back tomorrow Russell:-) hugs jan xx

Tim Smith September 21, 2017 at 1:37 PM Crime of passion...I'd plead insanity Jan Allison September 21, 2017 at 2:31 PM I couldn't resist a dark write :-) hugs jan xx

Anne-Lise Andresen September 21, 2017 at 1:35 PM - Murder !!! ... DEEP AND DARK, JAN ! - Well done :) - GL in the contest - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Jan Allison September 21, 2017 at 2:31 PM Thanks Anne Lise:-) hugs jan xx

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart September 21, 2017 at 10:27 AM Love your muse :) xomo! Jan Allison September 21, 2017 at 12:28 PM :-) hugs jan xx Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart September 21, 2017 at 11:05 AM I meant to say "I" love your muse ;) she clearly loves you. Jan Allison September 21, 2017 at 10:30 AM I worry about her Mo lol:-) hugs jan xx

Lin Lane September 21, 2017 at 9:28 AM Jan, you admitted to this and even posted a picture!!! There should be a bonus for you using all 5 words cohesively in 5 lines. Bravo! Jan Allison September 21, 2017 at 9:47 AM LOl the only thing I admit to is my muse is never predictable lol:-) hugs jan xx

Winged Warrior September 21, 2017 at 8:49 AM The dark side of Jan Allison...well done my friend, I like the dark side of you lol...best of luck...^WW^ Jan Allison September 21, 2017 at 8:51 AM I never know where my muse will take me ^WW^ but i challenged myself to write the poem in 5 lines. it's possibly too short for the sponsor so i understand if I don't place:-) hugs jan xx

Kim Rodrigues September 21, 2017 at 8:38 AM Wow! Quite dark! Well written! GL on contest, Jan! Jan Allison September 21, 2017 at 8:41 AM Thanks Kim i thought i would challenge myself to get the 5 words into one stanza and it worked out quite well!:-) hugs jan xx