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Concept of Heaven

When did the thought of Heaven fill man’s mind? We know religions, scriptures, faith- desired to teach that Heaven is a place to find eternal happiness for those inspired. But were these lessons that they taught required? For even without knowledge, some profess, that our collective stream of consciousness embeds the thought of Heaven in each soul- was always part of humans to express since time began- God’s gift to make us whole. January 21, 2015 ~3rd Place~ Premiere Contest: Rhymed, Metered Poem Sponsor: Janice Canerdy Judged: 05/08/2017 ~1st Place~ Contest: Dizain Me Sponsor: Dr. Ram Mehta Judged: 02/03/2015

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Date: 6/6/2020 6:45:00 PM
I love the flow of Iambic pentameter and dizain rhyme...so well penned. Congrats on your win.
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Date: 6/6/2020 12:13:00 PM
Congratulations on your win. You made us think. Enjoy your win and day..........
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Date: 5/10/2017 1:56:00 PM
Lovely write Sandra.... Congratulations on your win!
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Sandra Haight
Date: 5/12/2017 3:01:00 PM
Thank you very much, Meenakshi! Hugs, Sandra
Date: 5/9/2017 8:31:00 PM
Congrats on your win, Sandra. Great question to ponder, and a lovely dizain.
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Sandra Haight
Date: 5/12/2017 3:01:00 PM
Thank you, Agnes. Hugs, Sandra
Date: 5/9/2017 4:07:00 PM
Congratulations on your high-placed win, Sandra! A very thoughtful piece. Regards, John.
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Sandra Haight
Date: 5/12/2017 3:00:00 PM
Thank you so much, John! Sandra
Date: 5/9/2017 1:49:00 PM
This is a lovely thought about the here after Sandra, and in a challenging form. Beautiful! Congratulations on your top win! 7 ; :
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Sandra Haight
Date: 5/12/2017 3:00:00 PM
Thank you very much, Connie, for the uplifting comments, congrats and nice rating! Hugs, Sandra
Date: 5/8/2017 3:47:00 PM
Beautiful Dizain Sandra....Congrats on your win
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Sandra Haight
Date: 5/8/2017 6:52:00 PM
Thank you once again, Joseph, for all your supportive comments. Sandra
Date: 5/8/2017 11:04:00 AM
Well written Sandra, inspiring thought, congratulations...
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Sandra Haight
Date: 5/8/2017 6:50:00 PM
Thank you so much, Charlie! So nice of you to visit with your uplifting comments and congrats. Sandra
Date: 5/8/2017 10:12:00 AM
This is a BEAUTIFUL, deeply meaningful poem! Sandra, congrats on your win in my contest! Janice
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Sandra Haight
Date: 5/8/2017 6:50:00 PM
Thank you, Janice, for the great contest and for my nice placement and uplifting comments! Hugs, Sandra
Date: 2/15/2015 10:42:00 AM
Sandra ~ Congratulations on the win. It's an honor to read every poem In Dr Ram's DAZAIN ME contest. *Skat LOVE*
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Date: 2/6/2015 10:42:00 PM
this is a great thought provoking poem here and I wonder about this too. I think we all have a reason for having this in our minds, as your poem so beautifully shows. Congrats on your well deserved win.
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Sandra Haight
Date: 2/12/2015 4:15:00 PM
Thank you Andrea, for your encouraging comments and congrats. I appreciate it so much. Hugs, Sandra
Date: 2/3/2015 5:07:00 PM
Hi Sandra, This is a very cohesive poem with an excellent message. Great job. Congratulations on your #1 win. Have a wonderful day. Earl
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Sandra Haight
Date: 2/3/2015 5:15:00 PM
Thank you so much, Earl. I always appreciate your positive comments! Thanks again, Sandra
Date: 2/3/2015 1:55:00 PM
I tyhink this one is my favorite..Excellent..anccongrats. BG
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Sandra Haight
Date: 2/3/2015 2:43:00 PM
Barbara, thank you so much for your supportive comment and congratulations. Sandra
Date: 2/3/2015 8:30:00 AM
embedded in the soul, god's gift to make us whole. so very well expressed. Congrats Sandra. Mohan
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Sandra Haight
Date: 2/3/2015 2:44:00 PM
Thank you so much, Mohan. I really appreciate your positive comment and congratulations. Sandra
Date: 2/3/2015 7:29:00 AM
Hi Sandra , Congrats on win>love>rajat
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Sandra Haight
Date: 2/3/2015 2:44:00 PM
Rajat, so nice of you to stop my with your congratulations. I appreciate it. Sandra
Date: 2/3/2015 7:10:00 AM
A well written poem Sandra... many congrats on your win... lov, nad!
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Sandra Haight
Date: 2/3/2015 2:45:00 PM
Nadiya, I really appreciate your nice comment and congratulations. Thank you so much. Hugs, Sandra
Date: 2/3/2015 6:33:00 AM
Dropping back with my congrats Sandra:-) Hugs Jan xx
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Sandra Haight
Date: 2/3/2015 2:45:00 PM
Thank you so much, Jan. Hugs, Sandra
Date: 2/3/2015 5:20:00 AM
Thanks for participating in my contest and congrats on the win, Sandra
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Sandra Haight
Date: 2/3/2015 2:46:00 PM
Thank you, Dr. Ram. I really enjoyed participating in your contest and working with this form. Thank you so much for my placement. Sandra
Date: 1/28/2015 3:19:00 AM
Inspiring Sandra.. good take on the theme.. :)! GOD BLESS you always.. hugs//olive eloisa
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Sandra Haight
Date: 1/30/2015 2:42:00 PM
Thank you, Olive. I appreciate your nice comments . Bless you too. Hugs, Sandra
Date: 1/21/2015 2:58:00 PM
Wonderful words Sandra such a beautiful flow to the poem - good luck in the contest I hope this places really high for you I have enjoyed it so much:-) Hugs Jan xxx
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Sandra Haight
Date: 1/22/2015 5:18:00 PM
Jan, thank you so much for your nice comment and best wishes for the contest. I really appreciate it! Hugs, Sandra
Date: 1/21/2015 2:16:00 PM
A lovely poem, Sandra, and words that I agree with...best wishes in the contest. I love this form but haven't come up with any original ideas...hugs, Rhonda
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Sandra Haight
Date: 1/22/2015 5:19:00 PM
Rhonda, thank you so much for your positive comment. So nice of you to stop by! Hugs, Sandra

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