Concentrated Sugars

. Sap of the lovely Sugar Maple Concentrated by heat On that golden biscuit What a lovely treat

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Gerald Webb

Date: 12/15/2010 4:22:00 AM

Hi Sara, I've enjoyed reading your words, I'm happy to have brought laughter into your heart on that day! And thank you for your kind thoughts and lines! gerry

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 12/13/2010 12:56:00 PM

You have my tastebuds tingling, Sara! Is breakfast ready yet? Sending prayers and blessings for the holidays your way. Love, Carolyn

James Peranteau

Date: 12/13/2010 7:51:00 AM

Nice visual treat(write) dear poet ! much love, james

Doris Culverhouse

Date: 12/13/2010 7:41:00 AM

you're makin me hongry!!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 12/13/2010 12:03:00 AM

oh, my this one really gets me to wanting some of those biscuits. YUMMMY. (Sara, I used a rhyming book and spent five hours riding home from that wedding in May to think up all my footles. I must have over 150 of them!) LUv, Andrea

John Loving Iii

Date: 12/12/2010 9:50:00 PM

it's been so long sence i thought about this. nice rhyming. john

Walayee Poet Lay Whitlock-Ishway

Date: 12/12/2010 12:18:00 PM

YUM! Now I'm hungry for more...Lay