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Concentrate

all a matter of the will, complaints put ya off until, her ya really didn't fancy, been down that road with Nancy, some needs ya canna fill:( duct tape her mouth might still, concentration, 4 the dancer.... until... re: "Less of a Man" Russell Sivey, can. Don

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Date: 7/20/2012 12:07:00 AM
LOL.."duct tape her mouth", would surely help with concentration, Don, especially when you're driving a car.:) Prattling voices, complaints, and confined spaces, don't mix too well. Take care! Mikki
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Date: 7/18/2012 7:20:00 PM
Brilliant write my friend! I believe you have struck gold with this poem Don! I really enjoyed reading this tonight! Great Work!!
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