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Concealed and Revealed

I knew long before I saw your face Just how truly beautiful you must be Still, though pictures show your beauty It does not compare to that which is unseen But, rather felt through your kindness Through your words, through those things Said and conveyed by your loving heart A picture may say a thousand words But, your thousand words, my friend, show more Than your picture, as that beautiful face Enshrouds the beauty of your mind and heart

Copyright © | Year Posted 2008




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Date: 12/30/2008 4:35:00 PM
Michael, this is lovely. Perception is key to finding love. You've demonstrated this beautifully. Respectfully, Donna
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Date: 12/29/2008 8:55:00 PM
Michael, you go boy, I love this write, filled with romance, love and longing, so beautiful, it's nice to know that real men can feel this way, take care D-nyce
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Date: 12/29/2008 12:51:00 PM
Beautiful poem. I really like the last line. Creative title. Thank you for sharing your thoughts with us. Karen
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Date: 12/29/2008 12:36:00 PM
Sigh....I hope you show this to her..what a lovely tribute. BG
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Date: 12/29/2008 7:42:00 AM
Another beautiful piece whoever this is for they must be flattered. Blessings, ~Michaela~
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Date: 12/29/2008 6:55:00 AM
Another heart warming, melting her into a puddle of love! Good job...this is lovely! Love, Carrie
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Date: 12/29/2008 6:23:00 AM
Another very kind and beautiful write, showing your heart. :) Lovely Michael, as always, love Kristin
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