Concealed

tattoo - a well kept secret between me and you 		


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Contest: Monoku/One-liner#2 
Sponsor: Poet Destroyer A
Placed 5th

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Timothy Hicks

Date: 2/17/2016 12:31:00 AM

The mystery of this is tantalizing, and as it often goes with you, it can go in a couple different directions. I prefer to think that the tattoo is in a not-so public place, while in a not-so accepted romance ;)

Paul Callus
Date: 2/17/2016 11:26:00 AM

This is supposed to tickle the reader's curiosity! I hinted at a tattoo, and then the mind gets instinctively inquisitive. I will not spoil the fun by elaborating:) ~ Regards // paul

CayCay Jennings

Date: 2/14/2016 8:28:00 AM

Did you ever have to make up your mind? Personally, I could never decide what tattoo I could live with all my life. I often think about the sagging tattoos in people's geriatric future. Your Monoku is a thought-provoker and I enjoyed it. So good to be here, reading you ... CayCay

Paul Callus
Date: 2/14/2016 9:43:00 AM

Let me start by saying that I don't have a tattoo (though I am not totally against them!), so it has to be hers:) Glad that I set you on the musing trail. Also pleased to have you back...you have been missed:) ~ Regards // paul

Eileen Manassian

Date: 2/13/2016 7:19:00 PM

I love secrets....but, won't you share? ;) This is simply intriguing.

Paul Callus
Date: 2/14/2016 9:29:00 AM

Hmmm... intriguing...curious! But, you should know...who said it's my tattoo!:) {impish devilish grin...:)} hugs // paul

Luaer Solnox

Date: 2/3/2016 8:49:00 PM

Brightened up my day. Thanks for sharing.

Paul Callus
Date: 2/4/2016 9:40:00 AM

Thank you for visiting and commenting, Luaer. Glad you enjoyed and pleased to make your acquaintance. ~ Regards // paul

Elaine George

Date: 2/2/2016 6:42:00 AM

lol!!! This is so creative, Paul.

Paul Callus
Date: 2/2/2016 6:48:00 AM

Thank you, Elaine; so pleased that you like it! ~ Regards // paul

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/27/2016 7:34:00 PM

so cute. I love this!!!

Paul Callus
Date: 1/28/2016 12:30:00 PM

Thank you for liking and finding it cute, Andrea:) ~ regards // paul

Sara Kendrick

Date: 1/27/2016 4:43:00 PM

Ha!! Ha!! That would hurt..Enjoyed reading your work..Thanks for stopping by..Sara

Paul Callus
Date: 1/28/2016 12:26:00 PM

Thank you for the lovely spontaneous reaction, Sara:) ~ Regards // paul

Skat A

Date: 1/26/2016 11:37:00 AM

PAUL, CONGRATULATIONS, on your monoku #2 win. xox ** SKAT **

Paul Callus
Date: 1/26/2016 4:38:00 PM

Thank you Skat:) Lovely to see you again:) hugs // paul

Hansteven Selfa

Date: 1/26/2016 9:07:00 AM

Perfectly done Paul! :) Congratulations. -hans

Paul Callus
Date: 1/26/2016 4:38:00 PM

Thank you for stopping by with congrats and a lovely comment, HS! ~ Regards // paul

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 1/25/2016 10:04:00 PM

PAUL, ONCE AGAIN, THANK YOU for blessing my comment with a reply. THAT WAS NICE OF YOU!!! PD**

Paul Callus
Date: 1/26/2016 4:22:00 PM

Hi Linda! We meet again:) I must thank YOU for coming back again:) hugs // paul

Balveen Cheema

Date: 1/25/2016 6:37:00 AM

Congrats on your well deserved placement, Paul!Now it is no secret!!

Paul Callus
Date: 1/26/2016 4:06:00 PM

Thank you Balveen. True, it is no secret, but you still don't know what it is and where it is:) ~ Regards // paul

Michael Whatley

Date: 1/25/2016 6:22:00 AM

Aha, very creative use of Monoku, Paul. Congratulations on the well-deserved win!

Paul Callus
Date: 1/26/2016 4:05:00 PM

Thank you for the lovely comments and congrats, Michael. ~ Regards // paul

Dr. Upma A. Sharma

Date: 1/25/2016 2:29:00 AM

Wow Paul this is so lovely.. no wonder a great win.. big congrats!!

Paul Callus
Date: 1/26/2016 4:04:00 PM

You are kind my lady:) I love your comments! ~ Warm regards // paul

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 1/24/2016 9:04:00 PM

PAUL, CONGRATS on your awesome win. Stop by my latest blog "I Can't Sleep" if you'd like. Always & Forever ~LINDA~

Paul Callus
Date: 1/26/2016 4:02:00 PM

Thank you Linda:) Very pleased to be on your winners' list! hugs // paul

Arthur Vaso

Date: 1/23/2016 11:15:00 PM

Not very well, I found this twice now! (kidding! just wanted to say hello)

Paul Callus
Date: 1/24/2016 3:04:00 PM

Hi my friend....hope you had a nice weekend:) // paul

White Sage

Date: 1/21/2016 6:52:00 PM

A nice monoku there Paul, excellent and best of luck in the contest

Paul Callus
Date: 1/22/2016 11:48:00 AM

Thank you for reading and liking, WS! ~ All the best. // paul

Chrissie Morris Brady

Date: 1/21/2016 2:34:00 PM

Nice one.

Paul Callus
Date: 1/21/2016 3:04:00 PM

Thank you, Chrissie! Pleased to make your acquaintance. // paul

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/20/2016 8:47:00 PM

hey did you take the color code test? Are you red/blue? There are many of them in the world and many GOOD ones!! As for your monoku. it's adorable!!

Paul Callus
Date: 1/21/2016 11:22:00 AM

Hi Andrea! I started on the test, but stopped half way through because I had no answer for some of them! Perhaps I'll have another go, but I'm not ready to compromise:) Thank you for being adorable:) ~ paul

Casarah Nance

Date: 1/20/2016 5:08:00 PM

I wonder if any of your tatoo's are taboo....

Paul Callus
Date: 1/21/2016 11:26:00 AM

Sorry to disappoint you, Casarah...no tattoos:) ..but, mind you, I am not against all tattoos! Now you got me wondering...have you! ~ paul

Arthur Vaso

Date: 1/19/2016 11:55:00 PM

Loved this! Just catching up on some reading here!

Paul Callus
Date: 1/21/2016 11:28:00 AM

Thanks for stopping by, Arthur. I think I'll start a survey on tattoos...will be checking how many on Soup have one, or more...visible or concealed...:) // paul

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 1/19/2016 10:00:00 PM

oi, My bad... I'm not peeking. Just stopping by to say hi. Miss you... Love LINDA

Paul Callus
Date: 1/21/2016 1:56:00 PM

You've been missed, too, Linda:) I left your comment till last...pretending I had not seen it:) Promise accepted :) Hugs // paul

Poet Destroyer A
Date: 1/19/2016 10:01:00 PM

I'm going to have so much fun with this contest... I got lots to learn. :)

Poet Destroyer A
Date: 1/19/2016 10:00:00 PM

I just read the word, tattoo, then stopped. :) PROMISE :)

David Meade

Date: 1/19/2016 8:34:00 PM

I like those peekaboo tattoos . . . makes my imagination run wild! To scared to get one myself.

Paul Callus
Date: 1/21/2016 1:52:00 PM

It's good to have you stopping by, David; still watching out for a new post by you:) I have always found tattoos intriguing. Haven't got any myself, but I don't pass judgment on those who have. ~ All the best....paul

Judy Konos

Date: 1/19/2016 8:09:00 PM

LOL....LOL Again!.....

Paul Callus
Date: 1/21/2016 1:50:00 PM

Thank you Judy; you say a lot in so few words:) // paul

Ilene Bauer

Date: 1/19/2016 4:16:00 PM

i like this one, paul! yes, many people do have those sneaky hidden tattoos...

Paul Callus
Date: 1/21/2016 1:00:00 PM

Thank you, Ilene:) Once I heard pupils excitedly describing the butterfly on teacher's back. Later I found out that it was a tattoo just above her behind...her top rode up as she had her back to them giving an explanation on the whiteboard!! // paul