Compuction

Deep down there is a lot of hurt
Many things we ought to be by now but... we’re not
Nevertheless we still have destiny in view
But that’s deep down in our thoughts
Stranded in reality we know our time is due
Tomorrow is near yet we still don’t have a clue

Deep down there is a lot of anxiety
For we were consumed by our laxity
Oh! How we wish we were wiser
For life has thought us lessons much deeper
Only then do we realize our faults 
For the tomorrow we feared became our death

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Date: 2/25/2017 12:29:00 PM
Welcome to Poerty Soup. Good entry with a nice poem. Hope u will enjoy PS very much. Keep on writing..........//:) with love...........//Manmath
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Date: 3/3/2017 10:57:00 AM
Thanks a lot for your warm welcome Manmath, i'll keep trying my best.
Date: 2/24/2017 11:33:00 PM
Very deep poem about the faults of humanity, isn't it? Very wise and true. Welcome to PoetrySoup!
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Sky Walker
Date: 2/25/2017 11:13:00 AM
Thank you Darren
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