Compost Pile

A poem, lovely as a compost pile,
One lingers, sifts the elements awhile.

At first unclear, not all is evident;
Sharp images emerge as time is spent.

Though pieces, separate, may cause chagrin,
When taken as a whole, beauty's within.

To mull, to stew, to tease suggestions out
Though time elapses, ere they take shape, sprout.

For oft, a new direction is deduced,
Organic thoughts are grown, notions produced.

A poem such as this is never spurned,
But contemplated often, gently turned.

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FIRST PLACE WINNER For the "A poem lovely as a" Poetry Contest Sponsored by Margarita Lillico Written 03/03/2022

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Date: 3/7/2022 10:49:00 AM
Wonderful image Jeff and so uniquely creative. There are so many "organic" elements to a compost pile - each contributing to the ultimately life giving fertilizer it creates for creativity! Congratulations on your win. This is a fav for me. It really stands out in so many ways. Blessings for your creative compost pile as you continually add to its life giving, poem inspiring experiences.
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Jeff Kyser
Date: 3/7/2022 11:02:00 AM
Thanks, Sam! I'm not very good with the flowery language, so I have to go with what I know! :-)
Date: 3/6/2022 9:07:00 AM
Very clever and a well deserving win in the contest. It truly makes one think about the humble compost heap! :)Paulette
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Date: 3/5/2022 6:19:00 AM
Jeff, CONGRATS on your win with this thoughtful piece. Janice
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Jeff Kyser
Date: 3/5/2022 8:16:00 AM
Thanks, Janice!
Date: 3/4/2022 7:12:00 PM
I love this. As one who had large gardens (vegetable, herb, flower, roses) for many years, I am quite familiar with the gifts of the compost pile. I could not be without a large one and, often, it gave me new plants. Great idea and execution.
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Jeff Kyser
Date: 3/5/2022 8:17:00 AM
Thank you, Faye. We too have a large pile for our garden!
Date: 3/4/2022 5:53:00 PM
What a “contemplated” “pile”, Jeff, floated to the surface, “gently turned”. I’m drawn to your peculiar mindset from now on:) Congrats! M.
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Jeff Kyser
Date: 3/5/2022 8:18:00 AM
Thanks, Margarita, I enjoyed the activity - thanks for putting it together!
Date: 3/3/2022 10:40:00 PM
The circle of life, indeed.
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Jeff Kyser
Date: 3/4/2022 5:52:00 AM
Hey Robert, yes indeed!
Date: 3/3/2022 10:06:00 PM
Ha that is so cleverly written Jeff. Well done. Enjoyed. Debx
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Jeff Kyser
Date: 3/4/2022 5:51:00 AM
Thanks, Deb!
Date: 3/3/2022 9:47:00 PM
Interesting, to say the least. But, when you read it as a metaphor, it takes on most important meanings. Good writing, Jeff.
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Jeff Kyser
Date: 3/4/2022 5:49:00 AM
I figured if Love is a pothole, a poem could be a compost pile :-) I like reading a good poem that I come back to and find more meaning, and one that helps me tease out ideas of my own. That's fertile ground there!
Date: 3/3/2022 5:45:00 PM
Unusual, choosing compost as the title. Low grade fertiliser made from organic waste, as far as I recall. Good for the crops though, which is why you chose it, I suppose. Enjoyed your musings on creation of great poetry, good luck in the contest, Jeff
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Date: 3/4/2022 5:51:00 AM
To me, the best poems I read are one that make me think, reveal more of themselves over time, and lead me to my own ideas and thoughts - that was the genesis of the idea - thanks!
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