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"Composing Opalescent"
Together we arrive Composing opalescent blue-green green-blue jaded oceans submerged then rising from great waves thrashing in on our storm we are united mast-held and entranced entwined limbs bathed in sensuality's St Elmos Fire hitting our sharpest peak in the milky creamy way our skin meets under silver shadows casting fire like lightning dazzles lines another language in code across crushed indigo we are in our space it belongs to us alone writing another story wet, glistening and new a passion played like a last feast we taste each other, salty like brine my eyes green your blue eyes shine lips rosy crucifixes worn on each other between breasts and the landscape of rolling valleys traversed soft downed and succulent peach skinned juices sun golden shone through each uncharted territory we are joined in our own religion's calling it’s written on the sacrament of Our Story feather quills velvet soft seduce the passage where you real me in with your ink moving slowly along the lines of each soft cursive curve seduction now becomes a rite where we meet like paper and pen silently consorting and unravelling safe words and risk engaged like loaded guns where warm bullets are taken in a mouth passed like wafers the hosts in some wayward holy communion words felt and time dissolving on our tongues "Pamplona" spills out like the running mad and frenzied without a care in another world whether we are writing or not your body moves under my soft fingertips fluttering invisible words imprinting and soft branding burns on your skin you are charged electric and waiting I cut your leash and you are free to create in me a fresh new chapter against your thighs my body writes into your mind and flesh The Poem you are tied and bound to make of me and I seeing you for the first time breathing your warm breath over me like God created a new world Touching you I make you all mine tasting your midnight moonfire spreading fables through my beating heart and pulsing veins to push me to my knees genuflecting in some kind of prayer that makes confessions of a drowned past now useless and benign We write all night across our sheets with tomorrow we arrive composing opalescent we start our lives again naked and alive Walking in the land of Blue Sky and Sunshine (LadyLabyrinth/2020)
"Mr Sunshine"/ Perry Farrell, Satellite Party https://youtu.be/UsKcPYyu9To "Here in My Room"/ Incubus https://youtu.be/0IlPlKBXRHE

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Date: 1/16/2020 10:52:00 AM
What an experience would it be to love like that all through 2020...As usual a wonderful mastery of art in your pen... All the best my friend
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Lady Labyrinth
Date: 1/16/2020 1:21:00 PM
Happy New Year Arturo. Yes, wouldn't it. A person must find the MAGIC within to make it all happen. But this is a song yet to be sung. x
Date: 1/14/2020 10:54:00 PM
Beautiful lines.. Your imagination is at the best.. Winter fire lit and the poetic river flowing in romantic style.. Thanks for sharing..
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Lady Labyrinth
Date: 1/15/2020 2:22:00 AM
Thank you Jenish. I have an abundant source of inspiration. Let us hope it unfolds like a Lotus Blossum gone all Anais Nin floating across an Ocean of Possibilities...in Romance, Adventure and Love, to flourish in the land of some sort of brave. The next chapter unfolds and begins to be written with loose abandonment of the Past. This is the risk one takes to tear a life and heart from stasis; no movement forward, no dreams come true - ever. One has to rip oneself from the comfort zone, camouflaged behind a glowing wall of words, to dive into the Ocean (Life) and get wet and swim with other strange creatures. It's all about Love. The baseline is desire, sensuality, lust. But the net with eye on the catch, is called Love. Whatever the outcome, it unravels as it must, "The Story".
Date: 1/14/2020 9:22:00 PM
n.b. The use of the word 'real' in the phrase "real me in" (rather than 'reel') is intentional.
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Date: 1/15/2020 9:07:00 AM
You are real
Date: 1/14/2020 9:56:00 AM
Tasting of the midnight as the moon blushes and Dawn erupts a new horizon
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Date: 1/15/2020 9:07:00 AM
https://youtu.be/ys0rD9BeouI
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Date: 1/14/2020 11:10:00 AM
https://youtu.be/7TYRgXfpYLk
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Lady Labyrinth
Date: 1/14/2020 10:46:00 AM
https://youtu.be/0IlPlKBXRHE
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Date: 1/14/2020 10:34:00 AM
https://youtu.be/AUq9sgPqfJ8
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Date: 1/14/2020 10:18:00 AM
https://youtu.be/vAIM40HduFg
Date: 1/14/2020 9:53:00 AM
A beautiful poem of love, desire and poetry. Nicely done.
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Date: 1/14/2020 10:19:00 AM
Thank you Chris. Delighted you find this latest poem beautiful. I must stop in and have a read of your poems.

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