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Composing Destiny

I dream poetry; I breathe poetry, for poetry calls your name, feeling your inerrant essentia— your soul bleeds into mine— a collision of cosmos, diffused magnetically, once a vagrant in a haze of miasmic vapors—wildered and exposed— you unshackled me from this purgatory; inversely immersing me in your sphere of solace, and blooming artistry, lulling the vast polarities splintering each layer of my veracity. I dream poetry, for your love drizzles burgeoning constellations, amid rosette sepals galvanizing my orphic nuclei, with every spark we sigh, tethered to the infinite composition of our unwavering love compellingly, beyond heaven and earth, devoted to you— your fallen star; no longer silent, circling nocturne arias entwining our destiny.

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Date: 10/6/2023 3:15:00 PM
This is a beautiful write, my first time reading you and not my last. Welcome to the soup you are a refreshing presence to bless us with your wondrous words.
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Fading Star Silence
Date: 10/7/2023 1:06:00 PM
Thank you so much John, for your warmest welcome!! And your lovely comment has truly lifted me and encouraged me! Thank you for your presence!
Date: 9/15/2023 4:03:00 AM
Wow, this is such a wonderful write for the contest and I absolutely love the whole depth of this poem. How you've described that darkness devoured the life until one got saved by the solace of his/her beloved.. Yes, love truly is a shimmering beacon of hope. I truly admire your enchanting wordsmithery here "your love drizzles burgeoning constellations, amid rosette sepals galvanizing my orphic nuclei" Wow.. Absolutely stunning dear beautiful poetess, heartiest congratulations on the win :)
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Date: 9/14/2023 10:07:00 PM
Your cosmic binding lines propelled words of ethereal vibrance, what a piece. Beautiful to see you here and congratulations on this amazing win.
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Date: 9/12/2023 1:04:00 PM
Dear Fading Star, your fascinating artistry flowed upon the poetic page with beautiful and soulful finesse. A deep, rich, potent and passionate piece. Congratulations for your wonderful win in Ink's contest. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan
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Fading Star Silence
Date: 9/13/2023 6:51:00 PM
Ahh, thank you so much, beautiful brilliant poet! Your words lovely words of encouragement and grace is truly an honor to receive! Thank you again so kindly!
Date: 9/12/2023 4:55:00 AM
Just love this. Amazing writing. Congratulations and God bless you, Love, Gina
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Fading Star Silence
Date: 9/13/2023 6:52:00 PM
Thank you so very dearly! Your uplifting words are truly appreciated! Thank you again!
Date: 9/12/2023 2:53:00 AM
I absolutely love the way you’ve written this, the flow and depth of this blew me away. Truly an impeccable write that left me captivated in awe from the very first line, i especially love “ i breathe poetry for poetry calls your name” wow! That line resonates on so many deep levels. Thank you so much for writing. CONGRATULATIONS on being a winner
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Fading Star Silence
Date: 9/13/2023 6:53:00 PM
Thank YOUUU, my BSS!! It’s such an honor to receive your beautiful feedback! Poetry in and of itself..you, walking poetry! I’m so encouraged by your words, and I thank you so deeply!
Date: 9/9/2023 1:36:00 PM
Goodness. This feels like an epic poem shrunk down. Whoever is the recipient of this is one lucky significant other. I would love to see someone give a poetic response to this
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Fading Star Silence
Date: 9/13/2023 6:54:00 PM
Wow! I’m truly honored to receive such amazing feedback from you! It’s so encouraging and such an uplifting feel to read your comments! Thank you so much!
Date: 9/9/2023 1:14:00 PM
I love this so much amore? your deep soulful words show my your eternal love and depthbwithin your rare beautiful soul and gold heart,my blue rose. The grace and elegance of your seraphic majestic aura and your divine essence leave me breathless,my Korean princess. You are my strength,my tomorrow,my future,my universe,my world, you are my everything forevermore,my marvelous creature. I will always be by your side to be your everything. Mia bellissima moglie ti amo infinito per sempre amore mio
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Fading Star Silence
Date: 9/13/2023 6:55:00 PM
Ahhh..my beautiful soul..your love and support that you show always brings light and beauty into my world..seeing life and love through your beautiful eyes makes my heart and soul soar. You are my twin flame, twin star and everything..I’m so blessed to be loved by you and to love you..ti amo amore mio mio bellissimo martio..per sempre..tua noi Infinito. Il nostro Eterno amore, Mia passione

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