Beautiful Scars Poet Choka

Compose a Choka

oh, mother nature
   saturate my keen senses
      bring peace to your green meadows

starry night sprinkles 
   blossomed florets thirst for rain
      preserve nature’s elegance 

nourish chaste pastures
   envision life as your own
      lost in your allured beauty


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nurse sweet baby chicks
   cultivate fine sustenance
      bring feast to earthly creatures

may dusk bring closure
   savor moments of twilight
      dawn peeks through slight morning dew

oh, mother nature
   feel gratitude when you wake
      have sweet dreams in thy slumber



Date Written: July 19, 2016

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Sandra Haight July 24, 2016 at 5:38 PM Luloo, congratulations on your fine win in the 'Choka' contest! Hugs, Sandra

Jan Allison July 24, 2016 at 9:20 AM beautiful string of poems LuLoo congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx

Janis Medders Tobechi July 23, 2016 at 7:42 PM Congratulations, Laura. There were many lovely images in this poem. Thanks for being in the contest.

Tim Smith July 19, 2016 at 4:54 PM Very sweet Beautiful Scars July 19, 2016 at 5:35 PM thank you Tim :)-luloo

Sara Kendrick July 19, 2016 at 3:40 PM Enjoyed reading your work..Very descriptive..Thanks for the visit to my page..Sara Beautiful Scars July 19, 2016 at 5:35 PM many thanks Sara :)-luloo