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oh, mother nature saturate my keen senses bring peace to your green meadows starry night sprinkles blossomed florets thirst for rain preserve nature’s elegance nourish chaste pastures envision life as your own lost in your allured beauty ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ nurse sweet baby chicks cultivate fine sustenance bring feast to earthly creatures may dusk bring closure savor moments of twilight dawn peeks through slight morning dew oh, mother nature feel gratitude when you wake have sweet dreams in thy slumber Date Written: July 19, 2016

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Date: 7/24/2016 5:38:00 PM
Luloo, congratulations on your fine win in the 'Choka' contest! Hugs, Sandra
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Date: 7/24/2016 9:20:00 AM
beautiful string of poems LuLoo congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 7/23/2016 7:42:00 PM
Congratulations, Laura. There were many lovely images in this poem. Thanks for being in the contest.
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Date: 7/19/2016 4:54:00 PM
Very sweet
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Lu Loo
Date: 7/19/2016 5:35:00 PM
thank you Tim :)-luloo
Date: 7/19/2016 3:40:00 PM
Enjoyed reading your work..Very descriptive..Thanks for the visit to my page..Sara
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Date: 7/19/2016 5:35:00 PM
many thanks Sara :)-luloo

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