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...my first poem ******* I am safe when you are near, like a baby nestled in his mother's arms. I can breathe without gasping and speak without stammering, my embarrassment fades in the glow of your smile. I need no safety net; there is no pretense, no prevarication; your closeness brings me to a feeling of well-being. Dancing with the lights low and kissing in the rain, holding you so tight and hoping that you'll never let me go I feel complete.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 12/5/2015 12:07:00 AM
I have no words, you have a style so unique, its simply a pleasure to read your poems Keith!
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Keith Bickerstaffe
Date: 12/5/2015 1:16:00 AM
Thank you kind sir! I am most grateful to you. Best wishes, Keith
Date: 12/4/2015 2:53:00 PM
Beautifully romantic Keith:-) hugs Jan xx
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Jan Allison
Date: 12/4/2015 3:00:00 PM
Hope you are safe from the storm Keith - we had severe flooding and devastation on the Island yesterday and are bracing ourselves for storm force 10 tonight :-( hugs Jan xx
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Keith Bickerstaffe
Date: 12/4/2015 2:58:00 PM
Bless you Jan! From one Brit to another my heartfelt thanks. K.
Date: 12/4/2015 2:40:00 PM
Well done, keith! You made a sentimental subject authentic and readable.
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Keith Bickerstaffe
Date: 12/4/2015 2:42:00 PM
Thank you sir! much appreciated. K.
Date: 12/4/2015 2:35:00 PM
Sounds like you found someone nice! My father saw Sid Luckman play live. I have only been to one pro game. I am a Giants fan myself. Peace & Blessings Matthew Anish
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Keith Bickerstaffe
Date: 12/4/2015 2:37:00 PM
PATRIOTS for ever!!! Brady is almost an immortal... Keith Thanks for your delightful remarks.

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