Complete

In the middle of the universe, I stand;
The center point of my own creation,
Entity unto my own self, I remain true.
A spiritual being, having faith in my soul,
Faith in my tribe, and faith in humanity.
We are one, yet we are none if we fail to realize, 
What makes us the same is what makes us unique.
In the middle of the universe, I stand; 
Complete.


3 Feb 2015
© 2015 CM Davidson Pickett
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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February 15, 2015 at 11:05 AM
C.M., Congratulations on your awesome win. ~Skat~
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February 19, 2015 at 9:29 PM
Thanks so much!
Omalley Polatnick Avatar
February 12, 2015 at 8:54 AM
Sooo beautiful!! So true!! Congratulations!! :)
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February 19, 2015 at 9:28 PM
Thanks so much!
Fisher Avatar
February 9, 2015 at 7:31 AM
It is a pleasure reading this well worded poem...congrats on the win!
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February 11, 2015 at 12:52 PM
Thank you!
Reams Avatar
February 7, 2015 at 7:02 AM
Great poem! Congratulation on your win.
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February 8, 2015 at 8:25 PM
Thank you!
Chakrabarty Avatar
February 7, 2015 at 4:02 AM
In the middle of the universe, I stand; Complete. ya that says all. Grand conclusion. Congrats on win. Love Davidson.Your friend Rajat
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February 8, 2015 at 8:25 PM
Thank you so much!
Relish Avatar
February 7, 2015 at 12:34 AM
In a few words you ve spoken so much.... congrats on your win
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February 7, 2015 at 1:09 PM
Thank you!
Allison Avatar
February 6, 2015 at 6:10 PM
Beautifully crafted many congrats on your win:-) Hugs jan xx
Davidson-Pickett Avatar
February 6, 2015 at 8:30 PM
Thank you! Hugs...
Walker  Avatar
February 6, 2015 at 4:20 PM
CM, I congratulate you on your 1st place win. Super-awesome entry! Verlena
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February 6, 2015 at 8:30 PM
Thank you so much! I enjoyed the challenge of your contest; it was such a fun write. :-)
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