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Competing For You

I know you can't see me And my appearance you barely see. Striving for your attention, is like being lost at sea. You can't find me on the map or you compass. Because being with you, I know its justs being traceless. You know I always care about you and wonder when your sad. So what not give the feeling back, so that so bad?

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 1/14/2011 1:24:00 PM
Very well put together , I really enjoyed it,
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Date: 1/14/2011 11:22:00 AM
I am so happy to feel good enough to be reading poetry today. It was a pleasure to read your excellent write Paige. Love, Carol
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