Compelled

I felt compelled within my spirit
Even though it's icy cold
To go out on the porch for just a minute
To enjoy the works of God

When the door I opened
Beauty and sound did surround
For the sun was rising in the distance
Flashing color all around

The mist was rising in the distance
From the creek down the way
The sky was ablaze in color
From red to pink then gray

The sun a fireball blazing 
So close to mother earth
With jet steaks of white cotton
Across the pale blue morning sky

The colors constant changing 
As slow as a clam opens its shell
The banks of colors awed me
Filled my spirit until it swelled

The roosters sang in unison
Their love for the miraculous show
The mist just kept on creeping
Till the pines and forest overflowed

Now the mist surrounds me
Chilling me to the bone
But I feel wrapped in God's 
Abiding love that comforts and upholds

There goes another jet streaking
Across the morning sky
The exhaust will add one more
Layer to the color of the sky'

To be able to capture in words
Or on a canvas fine
The beauty that I see
In God's loving hand divine
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Strand Avatar
December 24, 2009 at 1:14 AM
Love the imagery in the inner poem of the 4th quatrain Sara.Thank you for your welcome comments..Rgds Brian
Meade Stephenson Avatar
December 23, 2009 at 6:10 PM
A very beautiful piece you have penned here. Descriptive with vivid imagery. Painting a picture with words...thanks so much for sharing and for taking the time to read my poetry. Many thanks too for your kind comments which are deeply appreciated! Have a wonderful day~Mary
Kelley Avatar
December 23, 2009 at 10:04 AM
Hi Sara, Thank you for your comment re: Michael's Mother. I love this poem. I could see the beautiful works of God as if I was there on the porch next to you! Kathy
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