Compassionate Tears and Protective Arms

For Mothers
The Taveta Golden weaver treats her littles so dear warms her nest as she's always there. Even when in distant search for a meal her protective covering; she ensures they wear so as to be absolute; she's always near. Her compassion; she invests in me with each and every tear which has an unbelievable healing power resurrecting me and making my problems mere. Despite facing the Lion's Den in fear unhurt; we pass through such furnace year after year and even though considered the most fragile and delicate the weight she carries, no one can bear. I'm tossed all around from rock to humous and trapped in the abyss of termination as the Demon of death valley makes my end so clear with no hope, I curse and swear ready to face the worse, with horrifying sounds of disaster I hear, but guess what! My Mama appears. She's a priceless godess not renowned nuturing me to be the best in town her protective arms; my invaluable crown. Despite sometimes giving her reasons to frown and embarrassing her like an annoying clown she's still ready to lay her life down making me sail through in safety in the expense of her drown.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013



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Date: 4/22/2013 11:04:00 AM
Beautifully and artfully written from the heart. You have talent. Keep writting. This is good enough to be published.
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Funom Makama
Date: 4/23/2013 10:23:00 AM
Ohhh! Thanks a lot Carol Eastman
Date: 4/22/2013 2:33:00 AM
wow! you have it all said, Funom its a love that never ends; a mothers love.. great piece and thanks for sharing -Lucas-
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Date: 4/22/2013 11:03:00 AM
Thanks a lot Lucas
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