Notes About The Poem

 

 

Companions

Companions

Tiny boardwalk along the Halifax River
Waiting to see what “catch” nature will deliver

Royal Palms’ fronds rustle in fall’s gentle breeze
No noisy distractions from teens on their jet skis 

Cute baby seagull swims above my fishing line
Unlike a pet, this bird doesn’t bark, bite or whine

He knows me well and I can tell he wants to eat
So I toss bait and he bobs his head for the treat

Yet he lingers, craving a flounder or redfish
You see, my companion and I have the same wish

Quick tug at my line; what prize might lie below?
A hefty blue crab emerges as my cargo

With claws and feathers interacting, I’m amused
But break up the fight so no animal’s abused

Such friends make life better for one who lives alone
In a pandemic when isolation’s seeds are thrown

Fishermen appreciate little rays of hope
That grant a smile and make it easier to cope




August 15, 2020
For Silent One’s “Sanctuary” poetry contest
Copyright © | Year Posted 2020


Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem. Negative comments will result your account being banned.

Please Login to post a comment

Date: 9/8/2020 8:05:00 PM
Very much enjoyed this scene of nature and the love with which it was written. All the characters are vividly painted and sacrificing, even the fish!
Login to Reply
Date: 8/27/2020 9:51:00 AM
You turn isolation into a delightful encounter with nature, Carolyn. Indeed we all find solace in our personal sanctuaries! I see that congratulations are in order...well done! Hugs // paul
Login to Reply
Date: 8/25/2020 3:30:00 PM
Carolyn, there are two monoku contests that I bet you would do great with. Hurry and let's see some!
Login to Reply
Date: 8/24/2020 12:17:00 PM
Wonderful Carolyn. I can see you quietly fishing and enjoying the sunshine and the birds. Love the pic. great stuff. God Bless, JB
Login to Reply
Date: 8/23/2020 5:28:00 PM
Hello Carolyn ... an old friend once it's great to catch a fish, but even better to be fishing. You paint a nice scene in your couplet to balance out some of the isolation we are going through - thank you Carolyn - Lindsay
Login to Reply
Date: 8/23/2020 3:16:00 PM
Back with congrats to you, Carolyn, for your big win with this heartwarming tale. Bravo, Gershon
Login to Reply
Date: 8/23/2020 5:43:00 AM
Glad to see this poem climbing the best poem chart, Carolyn. BIG congrats my friend on your podium win in Silent's contest.
Login to Reply
Date: 8/22/2020 1:49:00 PM
Big congatulations to you. I know how much you love this wonderful environment as sanctuary!
Login to Reply
Date: 8/22/2020 9:36:00 AM
Real friends are a treasure - a so peaceful scene you have imaginatively created my dear friend, what a darling little feathered friend you have made Carolyn - stunning poem. Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.
Login to Reply
Date: 8/22/2020 8:42:00 AM
Huge Congratulations, Carolyn. Perfect cadence, touching sentiment. (first time I've seen this) Very glad to read it, extremely easy to enjoy.
Login to Reply
Date: 8/22/2020 8:13:00 AM
Tranquil and serene, I just love these kind of places, and not hearing the modern world, as sadly it destroys such scenes. Reading your words, it felt like I was walking along the 'Caledonian Canal' in the Highland's here, very nice, James xx
Login to Reply
Date: 8/22/2020 5:55:00 AM
Sounds beautiful with so many great lines.. flows and rhymes so well.. Nice take on the contest.. Congratulations on your placement in the contest..
Login to Reply
Devonshire Avatar
Carolyn Devonshire
Date: 8/22/2020 8:59:00 AM
Thank you, Silent One.
Date: 8/22/2020 5:02:00 AM
Beautiful lines with a heart touching story with lovely companions, who always remain a friend only. " Such friends make life better for one who lives alone, In a pandemic when isolation’s seeds are thrown," With best Wishes df Carolyn...Ravindra
Login to Reply
Date: 8/21/2020 9:12:00 PM
What a heart warming story, Carolyn, especially the baby seagull trying to steal your catch - and the line about finding hope and easier to cope - we could all use some of that now - best wishes for the contest.
Login to Reply
Date: 8/21/2020 7:29:00 AM
Hi Carolyn, it is a joy to read your peaceful poem today. The words paint the canvas of my mind such wonderful images of nature. There is such peace to be found within nature. another beautiful write from a golden pen. Best wishes for the contest. Have a wonderful Friday. Hugs....Mike. XX
Login to Reply
Date: 8/20/2020 4:31:00 AM
Such a lovely piece Carolyn, a joy to read with good thoughts of nature too. Blessings always,Gordon
Login to Reply
Date: 8/19/2020 7:33:00 PM
The poetry Carolyn, is one of sheer peace, its the feeling i get when reading this wonderful gem. Stay Safe my friend..Harry
Login to Reply
Date: 8/18/2020 9:04:00 PM
Carolyn, Delightful trio each to their own understanding of life in isolation. -Richard
Login to Reply
Date: 8/18/2020 5:41:00 PM
Such an unlikely heartwarming(!) tale. I see now that you are a fisher(wo)man! Good for you, Carolyn. Peaceful Rivers and Streams, Gershon
Login to Reply
Date: 8/17/2020 6:48:00 PM
I like this a lot. Especially liked the line about having the same wish as your companion! Well done, a FAV for me! pat
Login to Reply
Date: 8/17/2020 3:55:00 PM
Great write and imagery, Carolyn, good luck in the contest. Hugs Eve
Login to Reply
Date: 8/17/2020 2:24:00 PM
One hopes the crab learned not to be so crabby! Aloha! Rico
Login to Reply
Date: 8/16/2020 2:52:00 PM
Your poem is a delight my friend.. splendidly traversing beauty of nature in lovely rhyming verses. Enjoyed the details that create wonderful imagery like being there with you. A definite FAVE for me, Carolyn.
Login to Reply
Devonshire Avatar
Carolyn Devonshire
Date: 8/17/2020 8:13:00 AM
Thanks for your kind comments, Vijay!
Date: 8/16/2020 2:03:00 PM
I enjoyed this Carolyn. A special place to be :)
Login to Reply
Devonshire Avatar
Carolyn Devonshire
Date: 8/17/2020 8:14:00 AM
Somehow, being near the water lifts my spirits. Thanks for reading, Heidi.
Date: 8/16/2020 1:53:00 PM
this is lovely, Carolyn. For me "home" comes right to my mind as sanctuary. I am seeing several of these poems now mentioning nature. I guess I am just not that big a nature gal. you know me. Just loving my kitchen, internet and tv!!!
Login to Reply
Devonshire Avatar
Carolyn Devonshire
Date: 8/17/2020 11:17:00 AM
Glad you enjoy your new kitchen, Andrea. Maybe one day I will have enough money to get mine done. It was built in the 1940s and certainly needs some updates.
Get a Premium Membership
Get more exposure for your poetry and more features with a Premium Membership.
Book: Radiant Verses: A Journey Through Inspiring Poetry

Member Area

My Admin
Profile and Settings
Edit My Poems
Edit My Quotes
Edit My Short Stories
Edit My Articles
My Comments Inboxes
My Comments Outboxes
Soup Mail
Poetry Contests
Contest Results/Status
Followers
Poems of Poets I Follow
Friend Builder

Soup Social

Poetry Forum
New/Upcoming Features
The Wall
Soup Facebook Page
Who is Online
Link to Us

Member Poems

Poems - Top 100 New
Poems - Top 100 All-Time
Poems - Best
Poems - by Topic
Poems - New (All)
Poems - New (PM)
Poems - New by Poet
Poems - Read
Poems - Unread

Member Poets

Poets - Best New
Poets - New
Poets - Top 100 Most Poems
Poets - Top 100 Most Poems Recent
Poets - Top 100 Community
Poets - Top 100 Contest

Famous Poems

Famous Poems - African American
Famous Poems - Best
Famous Poems - Classical
Famous Poems - English
Famous Poems - Haiku
Famous Poems - Love
Famous Poems - Short
Famous Poems - Top 100

Famous Poets

Famous Poets - Living
Famous Poets - Most Popular
Famous Poets - Top 100
Famous Poets - Best
Famous Poets - Women
Famous Poets - African American
Famous Poets - Beat
Famous Poets - Cinquain
Famous Poets - Classical
Famous Poets - English
Famous Poets - Haiku
Famous Poets - Hindi
Famous Poets - Jewish
Famous Poets - Love
Famous Poets - Metaphysical
Famous Poets - Modern
Famous Poets - Punjabi
Famous Poets - Romantic
Famous Poets - Spanish
Famous Poets - Suicidal
Famous Poets - Urdu
Famous Poets - War

Poetry Resources

Anagrams
Bible
Book Store
Character Counter
Cliché Finder
Poetry Clichés
Common Words
Copyright Information
Grammar
Grammar Checker
Homonym
Homophones
How to Write a Poem
Lyrics
Love Poem Generator
New Poetic Forms
Plagiarism Checker
Poetry Art
Publishing
Random Word Generator
Spell Checker
What is Good Poetry?
Word Counter