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Communion in Shared Spaces - Inspired by Love Communion of Glenn Hughes

Written: February 28, 2025, for contest Sponsored by: Robert James Liguori *********************** I long to explore the depth of your flummoxed mind, fathom the forms of your emotions, and outline the scenery of in dreams of avarice It seems to be the right time to thrive, to flourish In this sacred space, we build together, from strands of gloom where whispers bear root and emotion bloom. in quiet, we'll savor the halcyon garden of dancing daffodils and radiant rays, beyond splendid orbs and fluttering, fickle flowers Can't you catch a glimpse of life not being all gray? We have never felt so uplifted and so high full of hope! waiting wistfully beneath the whispering willow. As time ticks by, I have been tallying, and now it's time to amend our perspective. On this onyx challenge, I face, there are no winners to find. My role isn't to create splattered, noxious rhymes; rather, I often seek escape from it all. I strive to express our communion, as we sow and reap In this shared space Of ideas and inspirations, to freeze the marvelous symphony within your solipsistic gaze; don't you long to reconnect with my maze, the joy of everyday life? and capture that fantastic Melody in my spirit too? It only takes a moment, or so they say.

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Date: 3/6/2025 8:10:00 PM
'Can't you catch a glimpse of life not being all gray? ' I liked this very much. Congratulations on your win dear poet. Cheers!!!
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Date: 3/5/2025 4:06:00 AM
I can always recognize your style and form. Well done and congrats on placing. My next contest is on Iron Maiden. Please join in.
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Date: 3/3/2025 6:08:00 PM
SP, what you describe sums up the challenge of a really good relationship, which is not easy to maintain. If your associate is willing, however, it's really a good thing. You give a lot for people to think about. It's kind of a meditation to bring us to a better place. I was thinking how our communication in life is so much more valuable than physical assets or possessions. Smiles!
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Date: 2/27/2025 10:26:00 AM
I really enjoyed reading this wonderful write. "Good Luck" Have a wonderful/blessed day writing away..................
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