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Commotion

My thoughts are confused My mind tormented I feel like I’ve been used By this thing who pretended I have been put in a maze To discover and escape All the time of my days I’ve been stuck to it like tape But as I reach the end I realized I was betrayed But there is something I cannot comprehend Why drive me away to this path I conveyed I shall therefore hide my universe For now I know what to do I’ll stay silent, carrying this curse For ever knowing that love is not true

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 4/8/2011 10:03:00 PM
Very moving. You sound as if you have been deeply wounded.
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Date: 4/8/2011 9:11:00 PM
yes welcome to poetrysoup and this was a great poem. very creative in everyway.
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Date: 4/8/2011 8:59:00 PM
Welcome to Poetry Soup.. enjoyed reading your creative write tonight..hope your time on P.S. will be fun and filled with sharing with luv..
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