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Commonality

Carefully we planned for the big day Oblique qualms and doubts drove me away Moody and thoughtless insensitivity Maudlin thoughts curbed the festivity Onerous thoughts like small transmitters Now revealed my flutters and flitters Ashamed, you admitted you had the jitters Laughingly we both had learned Intimacy shared is intimacy earned Treasuring our love, our life unknown You and I, together we’ve grown.

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Date: 12/6/2021 6:35:00 PM
Linda, so beautiful. May I add The Bible (Ecclesiastes; Song of Solomon) advises to enjoy each other as spouses - totally, fully, minus shame - is a God-given right. (A marriage bed is the only rule) Blessings
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Linda Alice Fowler
Date: 1/8/2022 6:24:00 AM
Thank you for stopping by Anil. I appreciate your comments. Linda

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