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Common Words

That rainbow, the colors, the shimmer and glow! But what do I know of light refraction? This Medical Illustration Man has been drawn with only nerve and bone. He's got a lot of nerve! A dandelion here on the edge of lawn has broken up, separated herself from the dance troupe, taken a bow. This gray elephant, ready to stampede once his toenail polish dries, no long hides in the berry patch. Your plate, crusted with dry scrambled egg, reminds me of an egg-crusted plate I once held in my hand. Common words, spoken by a common leader to the common man is often an unsolicited lecture. The poet is rather ghazal-like among his friends, but all RHYMED and METERED in the market place.

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Date: 1/9/2025 7:15:00 AM
Who knew elephants got pedis?
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Moon Harp
Date: 1/10/2025 8:34:00 PM
Yes. And who knew dandelions were in a dance troupe. Thank you so much for commenting on my poem. It was fun to write.
Date: 1/3/2025 4:32:00 PM
Very interesting - made me think, "This gray elephant, ready to stampede once his toenail polish dries, no long hides in the berry patch."....
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Date: 1/3/2025 6:24:00 PM
Thank you so much, Paige. The elephant with toenail polish is from an old 1960s Elephant Joke.
Date: 1/3/2025 1:30:00 AM
I like how you put this together Moon Harp! Yours is a thought provoking style with a hint of fairy dust! Yours is comments inspired my latest poem as well as your name! Thank you so much for being who you are poet!
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Date: 1/3/2025 6:22:00 PM
Thank you so much, Karen.
Date: 1/2/2025 5:31:00 PM
Yes common words make the difference in each thought put forth. Such as the thoughts you shared here MH. Keep writing I'll keep reading...PS MH did you know Karen Jones did a Tribute Poem On You. Please comment on her Tribute she did a fine job and is a good friend. I sometimes miss when other Poets write about me, so many Poets out there. Thank you Dear I am assuming you didn't see it... It is titled Moon Harp.
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Moon Harp
Date: 1/3/2025 10:44:00 AM
Hi Michael, Thank you for keeping me in the loop. I will certainly check out Karen's tribute. I love this poetry community.

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