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Common Man

The traveler reeked of weariness, His companion was Fatigue Wear upon his clothes suggest He'd come a million league. Gaunt were eyes deep set and brown Above his cheekbones high His being was pure somnolence And I heard his silent cry. Hard roads had been his travel The pains chiseled on his face In lines of furrows on his brow Permanently enlaced Around I saw no motion there, then ... His head began to rise Finally he looked at me ... Suffering in his eyes. So quietly I attended And with a heavy heart I wanted so to speak to him ... But knew not how to start Within his labored breathing He then began to speak His words, when finally spoken Were truthful and unique His lips worked to form the words - Then said; "My name is: Common Man, I'm a father; I've worked hard; ' always done the best I can. "The road's become uphill and steep with Burdens I can't propel I've tried to move on forward - But, I stumbled here - and fell. "There are others on me Who so do depend I must move on forward, This mustn't be my end. "Now I must reach out to you 'Cause before I've never failed I'm turning now to you 'Fore on hardships I'm impaled". A calloused hand then extended Toward my outstretched hand And I want to heed the call For this Common Man. But, Greed and Avarice have won And assistance can't be lent - Wall Street, you see, owns me now: I'm Your Government.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 11/1/2014 3:04:00 PM
This was great! I can honestly relate.
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Jack Clark
Date: 11/1/2014 3:16:00 PM
Thank you, Dan, for your kind and encouraging words. Jack C.
Date: 6/14/2014 9:43:00 AM
Hi Jack, nice to know you: A poignant poem of protest and lament for thesuffering of many. My compliments.
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Date: 6/14/2014 9:58:00 AM
thank you, Ralph. I have read your offering here on Poetry Soup, which you entitled "Flame", and I must tell you I thoroughly enjoyed reading it ... twice! I'll be reading more of your work. Jack C
Date: 6/12/2014 8:01:00 PM
Please ad mine to the tons of favorable comments. I think it a truly wonderful poem . BBBBBBravoooooo!!!!!!!
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Jack Clark
Date: 6/12/2014 8:57:00 PM
Thank you, Robert, for your favorable comment ... it is truly uplifting to read such things. One never knows how poetic offerings will be received and interpreted by others ... and when the reception is positive, the drive to write more is rekindled. Thank you so much. Jack C
Date: 6/10/2014 5:52:00 AM
great work here Jack, really well penned indeed, look forward to more from you, God bless, Gordon
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Jack Clark
Date: 6/10/2014 9:48:00 PM
Thank you, Gordon for you kind and encouraging comment. It is warmly appreciated. Jack C
Date: 6/9/2014 1:59:00 PM
Ha!.. I am so happy to see this one featured, my friend!!.. Congrats!!.. Arlene..
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Jack Clark
Date: 6/10/2014 9:50:00 PM
Hi, Arlene! Thank you, thank you. You and I gotta' keep our "pens" filled and active!! Jack C
Date: 6/9/2014 9:13:00 AM
Great poem Jack. I love the rhymes, the imagery, the meter. Wow. the ending. You put it all together my friend. This one is going on my Faves. Can't wait to read some more of your poems.....Robert
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Jack Clark
Date: 6/9/2014 10:09:00 AM
Thank you so much for your kind comment, Robert. I must tell you: Your offering of "Family Life" touched-off many fond memories of my youthful home-life. Jack C
Date: 6/9/2014 7:26:00 AM
Hello Jack, , Congratulations on having your poem Featured on the Poetry Soups Home Page. Enjoy the coming week. Always & Forever ~LINDA~
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Date: 6/9/2014 7:24:00 AM
A piece of good poetry. Keep it up and congrats on your poem selected to be featured, JACK
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Jack Clark
Date: 6/10/2014 9:52:00 PM
Thank you, Dr.. I'm flattered to have had "Common Man" as a selection for this week, and I appreciate your taking the time to comment. Jack C
Date: 5/22/2014 2:55:00 PM
Oh! Jack.. Such beautiful imagery!!.. I wanted so badly to pick this man up and help him!!... And the end.. Don't know if you and I totally agree, but seems to me that people that need help are placed behind those that simply want it...Love to you... Arlene
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Date: 5/22/2014 3:28:00 PM
Glad you liked this one, Arlene. I've had tons and tons of favorable comments about it. I thank you for yours! Keep penning your entries for Poetry Soup ... I really like reading your submissions! Jack C

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