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You said you understand me head to toe, But why didn't you understand when I asked "Is it necessary to go?". Follow me you said when you left a trail on the track, And you crossed the horizon from where I couldn't see you coming back! Leaving behind memories which you said happened to be your best, And thoughtful promises you made genuinely were all put to rest! You made me love, you made me care, & and you also made me cry, Can't you stay back my sweet love and at least give it a try? Resistance, family & society are all a part of life, You loved me without thinking about them so why can't you be my wife? I dream of a new tomorrow with you...very pleasant & nice, Make our love win baby...that's my only sincere advice! Dedicated with love to: You Know Who

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Date: 8/25/2012 4:31:00 AM
yea name they come and go as it seems nice poem
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