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I'll love you till next Friday, I swear I will be true, I won't be like those Monday guys who are no good for you . The Tuesday ones are fly-by-night, they'll promise you the earth, but come the dawn they will be gone so give them a wide berth. Wednesday men fill you with hope, could this be mister right? Your dreams lay, strewn like shattered glass before the end of night. Now, Thursday, he could be the one, four days in, a good sign, but four days isn't faithfulness not five of them, like mine. Saturday men, just count them out, all football, clubs and beer, the Sunday ones will let you down until payday gets near. But me, I'm your man Friday, and with me you won't go wrong, just you and me, steadfast we'll be- until Monday comes along x

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Date: 3/3/2024 6:16:00 AM
Viv, I have been remiss in checking out your work and I see I missed a lot of really good humor. There's not much hope for women in this world! They're stuck with us.
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Date: 1/31/2024 8:01:00 AM
Funny poem Viv…l really enjoyed! Debx
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Date: 1/31/2024 6:23:00 AM
I hearby present you with an official reprimand from the Association of the Week Mens Collaborative" You are ordered to cease and desist such subversive assaults upon our membership and revealing our membership rules and regulations. other then that.....this is hilarious....very true...but still....
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Viv Wigley
Date: 1/31/2024 6:52:00 AM
Please accept my apologies, John. Until Monday. ??
Date: 1/31/2024 4:40:00 AM
Hey Vivster good to see you posting your unique brand of humor again. Wiggle on...
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Viv Wigley
Date: 1/31/2024 6:53:00 AM
Thanks Tom ,it's been a while....
Date: 1/31/2024 2:08:00 AM
A lovely poem. Well done.
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