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My heart beats to the sound of your name but when you're gone I wonder if it can beat again Words mean nothing without proof there's intention as the basis We're running in the same direction but in two different races My heart's all in, my mind's all out of sorts waiting for you Unfortunately my wish for us isnt' going to come true You can't commit to staying here, you can't commit love to show And at the end of the day, I'm the same way, I can't commit to letting go

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Date: 7/7/2013 9:42:00 AM
deep.... great couplets... love PD
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