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Soooooooooooo there's a Comments Contest well
HO HO HO ...AND IT AIN'T EVEN CHRISTMAS!

Whew!  Well, I never had much of a chest to get it off of anyway
but I thought about soup mailing a friend to ask his/her thoughts! 

And then I questioned myself, " Are you nuts?" that's how things 
get started! So that didn't last long...hmmmm

Next best thing to do was "let it sit" you'll think of something! hmmmm

Couple of days went by and I kept eye balling that block button
My hand would sneak over there and sneak back. 
Nope, if it happens again just ignore it. You can do this! 

Yes I can do it, thanks to Tom Hanks. Remember his line in
"You've got mail"?  "Just when you say exactly what you wanted 
to say, remorse always follows".  That is so true and should be 
taught from birth, 

but back to my unanswered soup mail....I thought of something 
and it apparently worked for I haven't had another shocker since
then but you never know when my hand will creep towards that
block button, just to see if it really works, of course!

Have a nice day!
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Mehta Avatar
August 31, 2014 at 5:08 AM
Your approach to comment is quite light. I appreciate the humor too, Judy. congrats
Dietrich Avatar
August 29, 2014 at 8:08 PM
I loved the humorous lines in this one, especially at the start of it. Your take on this theme was unique and interesting. congrats on the win.
Allison Avatar
August 29, 2014 at 3:47 PM
this made me smile Judy - many congrats we all share the podium for our comment poems:-) hugs jan xx
Yvonne Avatar
August 24, 2014 at 3:05 PM
this is an adorable piece of writing.
Richards Avatar
August 24, 2014 at 2:22 PM
Ps......I must thank you very much, Judy, for my placement.......I loved reading all the amazing "quotes" by my fellow poets...some wonderful thought went into this contest! Thanks again!
Richards Avatar
August 24, 2014 at 2:21 PM
This one made me smile, because I have hovered over that black button myself !! Should I, or shouldn't I?? That is the question that even Shakespeare couldn't answer !! lol !
Walker  Avatar
August 23, 2014 at 10:37 PM
Nice way of putting it Judy... Verlena
Manassian Avatar
August 21, 2014 at 3:09 AM
Judy!!! I hope I never get blocked! ;) I've visited you since your last long absence, but no response. I hope all is well with you. :) This is quite the poem. Very well worded, my dear. I don't have any blocked poets to date....and one was a mistake, thanks to being on my phone and hitting the wrong button. The person managed to get in touched with me, and the problem was fixed. I hope I don't ever need to! ;) I know things can get annoying at times. Hugs
Konos Avatar
August 21, 2014 at 12:41 PM
Thanks Eileen, Get in the comments contest and go for it!
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