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COMMENDABLE HORSES

With their undeniable transport-function Horses demand rigorous empowerment… Hence in their vital rejuvenating station They huddle for hearty replenishment. What a sight to behold them in their haven Feasting along grazing land’s abundance… While displaying prowess tenaciously proven Midst tourists enthralled by their elegance. Sternly ushered to their distinct fortress They soberly settle in their serene paradise… Vanquishing pressures of sports-distress In their stables ready for tomorrow’s surprise. Horses* for battle, others for leisure Commendable for their service-zest… Giving to their Creator gracious pleasure They deserve a salute with my gratitude’s best.
*Revelation 19:14 And the armies which were in heaven followed him upon white horses, clothed in fine linen, white and clean. March 31, 2020 1st place, "STRAND CHOICE Z,any form,any theme" Poetry Contest Sponsored by Brian Strand; judged on 4/4/2020.

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Date: 4/9/2020 8:17:00 AM
Beata, congratulations on your grand placement. Your "Commendable Horses" have certainly won the race. ~ Sonia
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Date: 4/4/2020 6:14:00 PM
Back to congratulations on your top win!
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Date: 3/31/2020 5:39:00 AM
Beautiful tribute Beata. Good luck in the contest!
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