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Commen Tater

stopping
now just
standing

talking
as if to
himself

are you
following
me around

as he decides
then suddenly
picks up a fork

don't follow me
especially
to work

then
motioning
in the air

won't let you
in as he is
now beginning

to try to touch
the air
in front

of him
now
talking

out get out
of my head
scratching

do i follow you
turning around
i don't need to

have you been
dictating with
now throwing

a punch
in the air
compared

to yesterday
so you were
here but weren't

saying anything
but he's on the green
stuttering putting

last hole
holy f***
it seems

slowing rolling
to be going in
get out

of my head
inches away
stay out

it isnt going in
so well below
so far distracting

par is far
from you
and humming

the looping tune
in my head
that's it

for today
at last
please save me

not even close
the record's stuck
well below bogey

we 
are the
champions

Copyright © | Year Posted 2020




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