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Coming Back Home

Coming Back Home Colors fade into the darkness of night, Once you left, the moon lost its silvery light. My soul is sucked into a black abyss, I long for your embrace...it's you I miss. No one can ever take your place in my heart, Give us a chance to rekindle and restart. Baby, I miss the beauty of your smile; And without you, life's not worthwhile. Can't you see that we are meant to be? Kisses and love await ... come on home to me. Home to me who loves you, my heart's delight; On to heaven, we'll sail on a blazing red kite. Me and you will light up the night... Everything, my darling, will be all right! Date: 02-24-2021 Contest: Coming Back Home Poetry Contest Sponsor: John Hamilton Placement: 2nd Place

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Date: 3/8/2021 8:26:00 AM
Pandita, congratulations in John's contest with this wonderful Acrostic poem, well done _Constance
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Pandita Sietesantos
Date: 9/7/2021 3:21:00 PM
Many thanks, dear Constance for your kind congratulations which I really appreciate! Hugs. Pandita
Date: 3/7/2021 12:57:00 PM
Hi Pandita, I'm just coming back to say congratulations on a well-deserved win. Have a great day:-) Alexis
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Date: 9/7/2021 3:20:00 PM
Awwww, thanks again dear Alexis for your sweet congratulatory words!!! Hugs. Pandita
Date: 3/7/2021 11:54:00 AM
Wow Pandita you're back with a bang and a top win! Enjoyed this one very much, just what I was hoping for, congrats on a nice win!
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Pandita Sietesantos
Date: 9/7/2021 3:19:00 PM
Hi John, thank you so very much for your kind complimentary words - much appreciated! I am so honored by the win!!! Best regards. Pandita
Date: 3/2/2021 2:13:00 PM
You have done extremely well with this prompt-theme, Pandita. A plea that will certainly not fall on deaf ears. ~ Hope you are keeping well, my friend. Warm regards // paul
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Pandita Sietesantos
Date: 9/7/2021 3:17:00 PM
Thank you so much, Paul - it's such a pleasure to receive your message! Stay well and forever blessed! Pandita
Date: 2/27/2021 11:04:00 AM
What a beautiful poem of a longing for a lost love, Pandita, nicely penned. Gald to see you back. John
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Pandita Sietesantos
Date: 9/7/2021 3:14:00 PM
Dear John, I thank you so much for your wonderful compliments! Have an enjoyable evening! Pandita
Date: 2/26/2021 1:59:00 PM
WoW! Pandita, You’ve penned a well written entry for the contest theme. I could sense the longing and desire in each line. Best wishes in the contest:-) Alexis
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Pandita Sietesantos
Date: 9/7/2021 3:12:00 PM
Thank you very much, Alexis, for reading my poem and leaving me your lovely wishes. Warmest regards. Pandita
Date: 2/24/2021 6:29:00 AM
Welcome back Home, Pandita! How warm and sensitive is your poem! The feel is so beautifully rendered into your Acrostic! A great pleasure to read your poetry! My warmest wishes. Regards and blessings.
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Pandita Sietesantos
Date: 2/24/2021 8:39:00 AM
My dearest Besma, what a pleasure to hear from you! Thank you kindly for your warm, complimentary words! Kindest regards, blessings, and best wishes always. Pandita
Date: 2/24/2021 12:50:00 AM
Well written Acrostic Pandita, nice to see you back, I hope you are well. Good luck in the contest Tom
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Pandita Sietesantos
Date: 2/24/2021 8:37:00 AM
My dear Tom, thank you for your kind compliments that I greatly appreciate! Enjoy the rest of your week! Best regards. Pandita

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