Coming Back Home

Coming Back Home

Colors fade into the darkness of night,
Once you left, the moon lost its silvery light.
My soul is sucked into a black abyss,
I long for your embrace...it's you I miss.
No one can ever take your place in my heart,
Give us a chance to rekindle and restart.

Baby, I miss the beauty of your smile;
And without you, life's not worthwhile.
Can't you see that we are meant to be?
Kisses and love await ... come on home to me.

Home to me who loves you, my heart's delight;
On to heaven, we'll sail on a blazing red kite.
Me and you will light up the night...
Everything, my darling, will be all right!


Date:	02-24-2021
Contest: 	Coming Back Home Poetry Contest
Sponsor: 	John Hamilton
Placement: 2nd Place
Copyright © | Year Posted 2021

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Captain  Avatar
February 28, 2025 at 1:06 PM
A nice one.
La France Avatar
March 8, 2021 at 8:26 AM
Pandita, congratulations in John's contest with this wonderful Acrostic poem, well done _Constance
Sietesantos Avatar
September 7, 2021 at 3:21 PM
Many thanks, dear Constance for your kind congratulations which I really appreciate! Hugs. Pandita
Y. Avatar
March 7, 2021 at 12:57 PM
Hi Pandita, I'm just coming back to say congratulations on a well-deserved win. Have a great day:-) Alexis
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September 7, 2021 at 3:20 PM
Awwww, thanks again dear Alexis for your sweet congratulatory words!!! Hugs. Pandita
Hamilton Avatar
March 7, 2021 at 11:54 AM
Wow Pandita you're back with a bang and a top win! Enjoyed this one very much, just what I was hoping for, congrats on a nice win!
Sietesantos Avatar
September 7, 2021 at 3:19 PM
Hi John, thank you so very much for your kind complimentary words - much appreciated! I am so honored by the win!!! Best regards. Pandita
Callus Avatar
March 2, 2021 at 2:13 PM
You have done extremely well with this prompt-theme, Pandita. A plea that will certainly not fall on deaf ears. ~ Hope you are keeping well, my friend. Warm regards // paul
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September 7, 2021 at 3:17 PM
Thank you so much, Paul - it's such a pleasure to receive your message! Stay well and forever blessed! Pandita
Gondolf Avatar
February 27, 2021 at 11:04 AM
What a beautiful poem of a longing for a lost love, Pandita, nicely penned. Gald to see you back. John
Sietesantos Avatar
September 7, 2021 at 3:14 PM
Dear John, I thank you so much for your wonderful compliments! Have an enjoyable evening! Pandita
Y. Avatar
February 26, 2021 at 1:59 PM
WoW! Pandita, You’ve penned a well written entry for the contest theme. I could sense the longing and desire in each line. Best wishes in the contest:-) Alexis
Sietesantos Avatar
September 7, 2021 at 3:12 PM
Thank you very much, Alexis, for reading my poem and leaving me your lovely wishes. Warmest regards. Pandita
Riabi Dziri Avatar
February 24, 2021 at 6:29 AM
Welcome back Home, Pandita! How warm and sensitive is your poem! The feel is so beautifully rendered into your Acrostic! A great pleasure to read your poetry! My warmest wishes. Regards and blessings.
Sietesantos Avatar
February 24, 2021 at 8:39 AM
My dearest Besma, what a pleasure to hear from you! Thank you kindly for your warm, complimentary words! Kindest regards, blessings, and best wishes always. Pandita
Cunningham Avatar
February 24, 2021 at 12:50 AM
Well written Acrostic Pandita, nice to see you back, I hope you are well. Good luck in the contest Tom
Sietesantos Avatar
February 24, 2021 at 8:37 AM
My dear Tom, thank you for your kind compliments that I greatly appreciate! Enjoy the rest of your week! Best regards. Pandita
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