Coming Back Home

Chugging away in the distant is mountain rail,

On and on its way to the town at the foothills,

Mind is set to get it tomorrow without fail,

I am returning home sweet, my heart with joy thrills!

Night is all I have to wait before journey home,

Glad to see the sunset as evening lights appear,

Boys are boisterous and loud as jugs of beer foam,

All dreaming of their beloved as day draws near,

Close to my heart I clasp a picture of my love,

Keen, keen to hold my darling in warm flesh and blood,

Her perfume I can smell her skin as smooth as dove,

Offerings of her juicy lips that match cheeks red,

My darling is soon to be mother of my son,

Eager am to go home as fast as I can run!

Written 19/02/2021
2nd placement
Coming back home acrostic contest
John Hamilton sponsored

12 syllables each line!
Copyright © | Year Posted 2021

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Kauffman Avatar
March 8, 2021 at 3:29 PM
Krish, what a beautiful reflection from a father's loving perspective! Your words really set the scene and put us in the picture from the first line. Congratulations on your win!
Radhakrishna Avatar
March 9, 2021 at 12:13 PM
Thanks Sam! Based on experiences - some mine some from others!:)
La France Avatar
March 8, 2021 at 8:32 AM
Krish, congratulations in John's contest with this Acrostic poem, well done _Constance
Radhakrishna Avatar
March 8, 2021 at 2:23 PM
Thanks Constance. Happy it was placed!:)
Y. Avatar
March 7, 2021 at 1:13 PM
Hi Krish, Congratulations on your win. Have a great day:-) Alexis
Radhakrishna Avatar
March 8, 2021 at 2:23 PM
Thanks Alexis!:)
Hamilton Avatar
March 7, 2021 at 12:10 PM
Thanks Krish for your entry, congrats on a nice placement!
Radhakrishna Avatar
March 8, 2021 at 2:22 PM
Thanks John! Great contest and enjoyed being part of it!!
Wolf Avatar
February 20, 2021 at 8:51 PM
An exciting and sweet homecoming awaits, no doubt, Krish. Your bouyant enthusiasm shines through every line. Very enjoyable to read and ponder! Cheers, Gershon
Radhakrishna Avatar
February 20, 2021 at 9:31 PM
Thanks My friend! young, in love and about to be a father and away from home! Cheers and good wishes.
Balasubramanian Avatar
February 19, 2021 at 11:08 PM
Good morning! Great Acrostic. Well penned. Not easy. Contest reminded me of Anup Jalota song Chitti aayi hai...vatan ki mitti..... Have a great day ahead. Take care, Rama
Radhakrishna Avatar
February 19, 2021 at 11:12 PM
Thanks Rama! yes, good contest. shall look forward to your poem. best to you
De Beaulieu Avatar
February 19, 2021 at 11:54 AM
Hello Kirsh, good luck in the contest. It looks like a winner to me. enjoy your day my friend.
De Beaulieu Avatar
February 19, 2021 at 3:25 PM
Hello Kirsh, thank you for the best wishes. Enjoy your evening my friend.
Radhakrishna Avatar
February 19, 2021 at 1:05 PM
Thanks Darlene!! May your wish come true!! Best wishes!:)
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