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Comfort's Angel

I had a dream that there appeared to me a little girl whose hands I touched were silk. Her tender eyes belied the purity of angels, and her skin was white as milk. She said, “In your despair, I heard your call for comfort, which I’ve come to bring to you. My hands do not look strong, for they are small, but used in prayer, there’s much that they can do.” Before me, in the darkness of that night, with palms upturned, she gently closed her eyes, and as she prayed, I saw a stream of light shine down with myriads of butterflies. I woke most splendidly refreshed in bed to see a monarch flutter near my head. Written 12/20/13 by Andrea Dietrich and Based on Visual #7 in nette onclaud's WITH THESE HANDS Contest

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Date: 6/4/2014 3:52:00 PM
Wow, precious, I wish I could see the visual that inspired this, but the image you have painted is very warming indeed. Very cool :)
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Date: 2/2/2014 9:07:00 PM
This is beautiful Andrea. Nice to have a nice dream. love phyl
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Date: 2/2/2014 9:06:00 PM
This is beautiful Andrea. Nice to have a nice dream. love phyl
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Date: 1/18/2014 3:05:00 PM
This is beautifully written Andrea. "With These Hands" I see you were a winner here. Definitely well deserved. Happy New Year Blessings Pam x
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Date: 1/15/2014 9:30:00 PM
ANDREA, :) Congrats, with your 'WITH THESE HANDS' winning poem. Have a nice night ~SKAT~
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Date: 1/10/2014 8:38:00 PM
written very beautifully with such tenderness and definitely talent,enjoyed reading this and others you have written,, Thank You for all your visits and especially for your words that you left behind, I barely have time to write with working and along with other life happenings and mysteries that come along, so I do apologise for not seeking your words out as much as I should,,,though as always I sincerely send my best and hope and pray that all things go wonderfully within your life.. Cecil
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Date: 1/4/2014 6:47:00 AM
Way to go...Sara
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Date: 1/3/2014 11:11:00 PM
Andrea, , congratulations, in Nette's WITH THESE HANDS contest... LINDA
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Date: 1/3/2014 7:31:00 AM
Beautiful.....Congrats on the win.
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Date: 1/3/2014 7:08:00 AM
First I must say congrats on your win Andrea, This was a masterpiece. A very good poem. I loved it....Hugs....Roger
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Date: 1/2/2014 8:32:00 PM
congrats on a fine win Andrea
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Date: 1/2/2014 2:05:00 AM
Contest: WITH THESE HANDS / / Sponsored by: Nette Onclaud is retreated!! - CONGRATULATIONS WITH YOUR YOUR BEAUTIFUL WINNING POEM, ANDREA. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :))))
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Date: 1/2/2014 12:32:00 AM
Thanks for sharing this fine poem on "With these hands" and congrats on a fine win, Andrea
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Date: 12/27/2013 2:05:00 PM
Utterly astounding! I can't help comparing your lines to silk as well. So smooth and flowing. The second stanza could be a famous poetic quote, I think. Extremely profound. Thanks for your analysis of Oak Tree Swing. I wish you a Happy New Year!
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Date: 12/27/2013 9:14:00 AM
that's a beautiful expressed Sonnet poem Andrea. I enjoyed reading it.God bless you. Hugs!Erich
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Date: 12/24/2013 8:48:00 AM
I can see this fluttering its way to the top, stunningingly beautiful poem Petal. Take care, Richard
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Date: 12/24/2013 1:33:00 AM
This is pure gold, Andrea....pure gold. I'm sure you will top the charts with it! You always do! So privileged to read your work.
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Date: 12/23/2013 4:45:00 PM
So much comfort in those hands. Beautiful! Peace. :)
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Date: 12/23/2013 8:06:00 AM
This is pure beauty. Last week I was at a butterfly palace. There was a living angel and butterflies were resting on her head, robes, and her hands. Amazing to see.
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Date: 12/22/2013 4:39:00 PM
beautiful write, my friend - a sure winner
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Date: 12/22/2013 3:52:00 PM
This was indeed a comforting Andrea, and a lovely vision for the holidays. Mele Kalikimaka! Meaning (Merry Christmas in Hawaiian)
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Date: 12/22/2013 11:08:00 AM
A wonderful poem is comfort's Angel.Seeing little praying hands are a great comfort Andrea.In times of pain and despair, if one could see an Angel by dream; it is really a comfort from GOD.Good luck in the contest.(: ) Jenish.
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Date: 12/22/2013 9:11:00 AM
This is a very lovely and perfect poem my dearest friend Andrea. You always write very well. Loving & embracing this stellar sonnet of yours so much. I wish I'll also have a dream like this. ;) To my fave. TYSM for sharing! Advance merry merry Christmas! Hope you've already received my Christmas greetings w/ lil gift fr the bottom of my heart. Did u? I hope so. Wishing you all the best this Christmas & NewYear to come! love much & biggest hugs, Leonora
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Date: 12/22/2013 8:25:00 AM
Excellent. Beautifully written. Enjoyed reading it. Tfs. I wish you a Merry Christmas and a very happy new year for 2014. God bless
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Date: 12/21/2013 11:55:00 PM
hi sweet sista Andrea.. how are you... hope everthing is well <3 thank you for sharing this wonderful piece <3 much love and hugs <3 Sk
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