Comfort's Angel

I had a dream that there appeared to me a little girl whose hands I touched were silk. Her tender eyes belied the purity of angels, and her skin was white as milk. She said, “In your despair, I heard your call for comfort, which I’ve come to bring to you. My hands do not look strong, for they are small, but used in prayer, there’s much that they can do.” Before me, in the darkness of that night, with palms upturned, she gently closed her eyes, and as she prayed, I saw a stream of light shine down with myriads of butterflies. I woke most splendidly refreshed in bed to see a monarch flutter near my head. Written 12/20/13 by Andrea Dietrich and Based on Visual #7 in nette onclaud's WITH THESE HANDS Contest
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Nance Avatar
June 4, 2014 at 3:52 PM
Wow, precious, I wish I could see the visual that inspired this, but the image you have painted is very warming indeed. Very cool :)
Babcock Avatar
February 2, 2014 at 9:07 PM
This is beautiful Andrea. Nice to have a nice dream. love phyl
Babcock Avatar
February 2, 2014 at 9:06 PM
This is beautiful Andrea. Nice to have a nice dream. love phyl
Woolford Avatar
January 18, 2014 at 3:05 PM
This is beautifully written Andrea. "With These Hands" I see you were a winner here. Definitely well deserved. Happy New Year Blessings Pam x
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January 15, 2014 at 9:30 PM
ANDREA, :) Congrats, with your 'WITH THESE HANDS' winning poem. Have a nice night ~SKAT~
Hickman Avatar
January 10, 2014 at 8:38 PM
written very beautifully with such tenderness and definitely talent,enjoyed reading this and others you have written,, Thank You for all your visits and especially for your words that you left behind, I barely have time to write with working and along with other life happenings and mysteries that come along, so I do apologise for not seeking your words out as much as I should,,,though as always I sincerely send my best and hope and pray that all things go wonderfully within your life.. Cecil
Kendrick Avatar
January 4, 2014 at 6:47 AM
Way to go...Sara
A   Avatar
January 3, 2014 at 11:11 PM
Andrea, , congratulations, in Nette's WITH THESE HANDS contest... LINDA
Ali Avatar
January 3, 2014 at 7:31 AM
Beautiful.....Congrats on the win.
Horsch Avatar
January 3, 2014 at 7:08 AM
First I must say congrats on your win Andrea, This was a masterpiece. A very good poem. I loved it....Hugs....Roger
May Avatar
January 2, 2014 at 8:32 PM
congrats on a fine win Andrea
Andresen Avatar
January 2, 2014 at 2:05 AM
Contest: WITH THESE HANDS / / Sponsored by: Nette Onclaud is retreated!! - CONGRATULATIONS WITH YOUR YOUR BEAUTIFUL WINNING POEM, ANDREA. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :))))
Mehta Avatar
January 2, 2014 at 12:32 AM
Thanks for sharing this fine poem on "With these hands" and congrats on a fine win, Andrea
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December 27, 2013 at 2:05 PM
Utterly astounding! I can't help comparing your lines to silk as well. So smooth and flowing. The second stanza could be a famous poetic quote, I think. Extremely profound. Thanks for your analysis of Oak Tree Swing. I wish you a Happy New Year!
Goller Avatar
December 27, 2013 at 9:14 AM
that's a beautiful expressed Sonnet poem Andrea. I enjoyed reading it.God bless you. Hugs!Erich
Seal Avatar
December 24, 2013 at 8:48 AM
I can see this fluttering its way to the top, stunningingly beautiful poem Petal. Take care, Richard
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December 24, 2013 at 1:33 AM
This is pure gold, Andrea....pure gold. I'm sure you will top the charts with it! You always do! So privileged to read your work.
Johnson Avatar
December 23, 2013 at 4:45 PM
So much comfort in those hands. Beautiful! Peace. :)
Sirak Avatar
December 23, 2013 at 8:06 AM
This is pure beauty. Last week I was at a butterfly palace. There was a living angel and butterflies were resting on her head, robes, and her hands. Amazing to see.
Horne Avatar
December 22, 2013 at 4:39 PM
beautiful write, my friend - a sure winner
Marcum Wong Avatar
December 22, 2013 at 3:52 PM
This was indeed a comforting Andrea, and a lovely vision for the holidays. Mele Kalikimaka! Meaning (Merry Christmas in Hawaiian)
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December 22, 2013 at 11:08 AM
A wonderful poem is comfort's Angel.Seeing little praying hands are a great comfort Andrea.In times of pain and despair, if one could see an Angel by dream; it is really a comfort from GOD.Good luck in the contest.(: ) Jenish.
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December 22, 2013 at 9:11 AM
This is a very lovely and perfect poem my dearest friend Andrea. You always write very well. Loving & embracing this stellar sonnet of yours so much. I wish I'll also have a dream like this. ;) To my fave. TYSM for sharing! Advance merry merry Christmas! Hope you've already received my Christmas greetings w/ lil gift fr the bottom of my heart. Did u? I hope so. Wishing you all the best this Christmas & NewYear to come! love much & biggest hugs, Leonora
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December 22, 2013 at 8:25 AM
Excellent. Beautifully written. Enjoyed reading it. Tfs. I wish you a Merry Christmas and a very happy new year for 2014. God bless
Komala Avatar
December 21, 2013 at 11:55 PM
hi sweet sista Andrea.. how are you... hope everthing is well <3 thank you for sharing this wonderful piece <3 much love and hugs <3 Sk
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