Sara Kendrick Poet Free verse

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Comfortable

Comfortable as an old shoe
One that has finally been put out of use
Found a new function

That is what I had become 
With you..
When I would read what you had to say

The lines almost fit me to a tee
The timing was so right
My emotion you had captured

I would get my thoughts together
Visiting those familiar
Reading, seeing those winners

Check out contest
Write a new work to impress
Now !!

Well now
I don't even know if I will get one posted before I am logged off...

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M. Hussain Effendi September 22, 2011 at 4:47 AM Hey Sara! I m gonna be frank, I did not really get the poem, it was probably too good and too beyond the level of understanding of an amateur poet like myself. Care to shed some light?

Wole Francis September 22, 2011 at 2:57 AM nicely written Sara

Tony Lane September 21, 2011 at 2:19 PM Don't try to be the fastest. Some wild eyed young poet will ride into town just lookin' to make his mark and even if you win, there's another right behind him. Tony