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Comet Punctuation - Haiku

Comet Punctuation - Haiku murky water, still jungle web vegetates silk comet punctures pond

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Jan Allison

Date: 12/1/2014 11:42:00 AM

wonderful imagery Earl:-) Hugs Jan xx

Earl Schumacker
Date: 12/1/2014 2:05:00 PM

Hi Jan. Thanks. I'm trying to get into the mind set of the ancient Japanese when they create that perfect moment within a moment somewhere between a moment of action or non-action that may or may not exist. I'm glad you liked this one....by the way, the comet absolutely obliterated the dirty murky calm pond. It did not survive...but the jungle did. Have a pleasant day. Earl

David Meade

Date: 12/1/2014 8:21:00 AM

I like the combination -- water jungle comet what each produces. Nicely done.

Earl Schumacker
Date: 12/1/2014 8:36:00 AM

Hi David, Thank you for your observations. I'm glad you liked it. Have a great day. Earl