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Comes the Storm

clouds sing thunder fields cry to wind rain shouts from sky lightening talks written 8-31-2019 Charlie-Quadku Poetry Contest 2nd place "Charlie-Quadku" A haiku with 4 lines and each line has just 4 syllables. Sponsor: charles messina

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Jeanne Mcgee

Date: 9/22/2019 10:26:00 AM

Thank you for all your kind words...so glad you all enjoyed the vision.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 9/20/2019 5:57:00 PM

loved how you used personification here. Congrats on your fine win.

Sandra Adams

Date: 9/18/2019 12:42:00 PM

i love watching a good summer storm from my porch...nice penning, congratulations on your fine win :) hugs

Constance La France

Date: 9/18/2019 11:35:00 AM

Jeanne congratulations on your win, excellent **

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 9/18/2019 11:07:00 AM

- Congratulations on your great Haiku, Jeanne :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Charles Messina

Date: 9/18/2019 6:37:00 AM

Very well done, Jeanne. Love the imagery in this poem. Congratulations on your win in my contest. Hugs Charlie

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 9/10/2019 3:25:00 AM

"rain shouts from sky" - great imagery!

Jeanne Mcgee

Date: 9/4/2019 7:56:00 AM

Thank you dear friends for your comments...there has been tons of storms here lately to listen to for inspiration.

Paul Callus

Date: 9/4/2019 5:23:00 AM

This is very expressive, Jeanne. The striking imagery precedes the imminent storm. Regards // paul

Regina Mcintosh

Date: 8/31/2019 11:28:00 PM

I enjoyed reading. Best of luck in the contest :) Thanks tons for the thoughtful write.

M. L. Kiser

Date: 8/31/2019 10:16:00 PM

Yes it does, well penned.

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 8/31/2019 9:35:00 PM

Beautifully done - not easy to figure out a 16 syllable poem!

Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 8/31/2019 5:00:00 PM

Hello Jeanne McGee, yes that would be a storm.Have a nice evening my friend.