Jeanne Mcgee Poet Haiku

Comes the Storm

clouds sing thunder
fields cry to wind
rain shouts from sky
lightening talks


written 8-31-2019
Charlie-Quadku Poetry Contest   2nd place
"Charlie-Quadku" A haiku with 4 lines and each line has just 4 syllables. 
Sponsor:  charles messina

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Jeanne Mcgee September 22, 2019 at 10:26 AM Thank you for all your kind words...so glad you all enjoyed the vision.

Andrea Dietrich September 20, 2019 at 5:57 PM loved how you used personification here. Congrats on your fine win.

Sandra Adams September 18, 2019 at 12:42 PM i love watching a good summer storm from my porch...nice penning, congratulations on your fine win :) hugs

Constance La France September 18, 2019 at 11:35 AM Jeanne congratulations on your win, excellent **

Anne-Lise Andresen September 18, 2019 at 11:07 AM - Congratulations on your great Haiku, Jeanne :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Charles Messina September 18, 2019 at 6:37 AM Very well done, Jeanne. Love the imagery in this poem. Congratulations on your win in my contest. Hugs Charlie

Caren Krutsinger September 10, 2019 at 3:25 AM "rain shouts from sky" - great imagery!

Jeanne Mcgee September 4, 2019 at 7:56 AM Thank you dear friends for your comments...there has been tons of storms here lately to listen to for inspiration.

Paul Callus September 4, 2019 at 5:23 AM This is very expressive, Jeanne. The striking imagery precedes the imminent storm. Regards // paul

Regina Mcintosh August 31, 2019 at 11:28 PM I enjoyed reading. Best of luck in the contest :) Thanks tons for the thoughtful write.

M. L. Kiser August 31, 2019 at 10:16 PM Yes it does, well penned.

Caren Krutsinger August 31, 2019 at 9:35 PM Beautifully done - not easy to figure out a 16 syllable poem!

Darlene De Beaulieu August 31, 2019 at 5:00 PM Hello Jeanne McGee, yes that would be a storm.Have a nice evening my friend.