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Comes Now the Hush

Comes now the hush of white flowers as borealis crawls into the night, my spirit enfolding light of incandescent earthly bowers... clayed marbles tint the hours dazzling me with budding sprite, comes now the hush And to feel sand and air in a weave the unwrapping of moon is bright, my breath and fire swoon to recite... "dear inner god, grant me reprieve," comes now the hush
For Contest No 210 of Brian Strand Repost/ Sept 24, 2016 ----------------------------- *Rondaine form: rhyme scheme of a.b.b.a.a.b.R. a.b.b.a.R. ( similar to rondeau)

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Date: 4/1/2012 1:07:00 PM
I am very happy to send you this congratulations on your win in ^Rick's "Glistening Thoughts" contest Nette. Love, Carol
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Date: 3/31/2012 1:46:00 PM
Love the title and the picture you paint with your words. Mike
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Date: 3/31/2012 12:48:00 PM
congrats Nette luv on a tremendous write and win .. penetrating lines with a tempting title to ingest every line .. superb as always luv..
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Date: 3/31/2012 12:13:00 PM
Congratulations on your glistening thoughts and win. Love, Joyce
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Date: 3/31/2012 9:05:00 AM
This is beautiful, Nette. Congrats on your win. And you even did it in a nice form similar to my loved Rondeau. Impressive!
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Date: 3/31/2012 5:42:00 AM
Congrats on your winning work...Enjoyed reading this morn..Sara
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Date: 3/30/2012 11:35:00 PM
Congratulations on your wonderful win Nette. A difficult form and excellent poem.
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Date: 3/30/2012 10:42:00 PM
Congratulations Nette on your win!!! So Beautiful...Well Done....big huggsss,love deb
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Date: 3/30/2012 7:34:00 PM
Congrats on your second place win, Nette! Beautiful lines you have penned and I love the form. Blessings, Rhonda
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Date: 3/18/2012 7:45:00 PM
truly glistening thoughts Nette luv.. once again a prize package of golden words.. good luck luv.. also did another edit just now ..so it makes more sense to ,e too.. thankxxx..luv..
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Date: 3/18/2012 1:44:00 PM
It sure glistens Nette. The images grant the reader a moment of reprieve from the ordinary. Magical as always! Lizzie
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Date: 3/18/2012 12:55:00 AM
This is a very deep prayer to your inner soul.A heartfelt write.Love how you brought the nature's element.Best wishes.
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Date: 3/17/2012 4:35:00 PM
Amazing write, Nette. Thanks - loved your contest. I wrote about the Indians' Ghost Dance, but some people thought it was about ghosts dancing - an idea I hadn't even thought of, but I like it!!
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Date: 3/17/2012 1:59:00 PM
Wow, Nette, this is quite an amazing write if I do say so myself! I rather enjoyed your poem, it's one of your greats! You have awesome descriptions that refer us to wonderful images and visions from those images! You always have such descriptive writes Nette, and I love them a lot! I especially like the line, "as borealis crawls into the night" that line sure does say a lot for the poem and the incandescent part of the write! I love this poem a lot! Great Work!!
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Date: 3/17/2012 1:24:00 PM
Hi nette, just visit this lovely written poem. Luck to you in contest!!! Have a lovely weekend! - oxox love Anne-Lise
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Date: 3/17/2012 1:22:00 PM
Just beautiful Nette , happy st Patrick's day to you and your family , Hugs and best wishes , Declan xxx
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